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Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Miku-chan » Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:02 am

Ok, so I saw this pic and had to caption it. Once I did I thought...'Wow, this would make for some good TF captions for others who feel the call as well', so I introduce to you the Darkwood Forest Here is the first of what I hope becomes many...


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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Marky » Sat Aug 28, 2010 10:17 am

There's one main problem with this. Either the writing needs to be bigger, or the picture blown up a bit to accommodate bigger-sized font. I honestly can't read the thing, especially with the color of the font toward the top, in regards to the background.
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Miku-chan » Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:50 am

Re edited and posted, image don't get any larger though
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Marky » Sat Aug 28, 2010 1:47 pm

Alright. Thanks. And after being able to read it now, the caption looks pretty good. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Miku-chan » Sun Aug 29, 2010 9:27 am

Aaaannnnd....number 2

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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Rodney » Sun Aug 29, 2010 12:02 pm

I like your captions, but I feel there is a slight problem of readability on the second one.
I get the impression that you are using microsoft paint. The image is blurry.

Maybe you could try using Paint.net (it's free : http://www.getpaint.net/download.html )
And adjust the size of the font and JPEG compression ratio to have a result that is more readable.
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Marky » Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:32 pm

Yeah, I have to say it is kinda hard to read it, and I think you misspelled 'during' each time you used it in there. However, it was pretty good, but, yeah. I suggest doing what Rodney does and maybe double-check on some spellings...cause I'm not sure if durring is actually a word. Well, Firefox says it isn't, but, yeah...
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Miku-chan » Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:43 pm

*I actually picked up a trojan virus here of all places, and in the act of restoring my drive, I have been using a old program called PaintPro until I can get the rest of my backups out of storage, and what looked good when I posted it on Photobucket, I wind up re-editing the script...oh well, will re edit later tonight...
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Maiden Miki » Sun Aug 29, 2010 6:48 pm

Miku-chan wrote:*I actually picked up a trojan virus here of all places, and in the act of restoring my drive, I have been using a old program called PaintPro until I can get the rest of my backups out of storage, and what looked good when I posted it on Photobucket, I wind up re-editing the script...oh well, will re edit later tonight...

What version of Windows do you have? That is if you have Windows.
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Blaze » Sun Aug 29, 2010 10:30 pm

What I can make out past the blurriness looks really good! Can't wait to see more.
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Ninian » Mon Aug 30, 2010 2:34 am

So basically, people who approach this forest are killed and made to be wandering feminine spirits?
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Miku-chan » Mon Aug 30, 2010 3:37 am

Not killed per say, but bound to the Darkwood thru the feminization. It is not to say one may escape unchanged, but their nature also helps set the tone as well as the phase of the moon, so far the changes have been under the full moon..,

Here is number three, and this one is done a bit differently because I am doing this thru my iPhone...

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Officer Leon Sythe was not a happy man. Two kids in seven months had gone missing near Darkwood, his beat. Sure his usual routes kept him away from the wood, but the parents were clammoring about how their kids dissapeared and he was getting too old to just put up with it. Nearing the forest edge on the night of the full moon, his police car stalls out and wont restart. A fog so dense he looses his berrings rolls in as he exits the car. Soon, he too is lost to the wood as the spirits of the wood possess him and reshape his body and mind to the will of the wood. It is said if you see the hunter Leah, she has given you a second chance and escape the Darkwood while you can, though your second chance may not leave you unchanged...
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Rodney » Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:21 am

Miku-chan wrote:Not killed per say, but bound to the Darkwood thru the feminization. It is not to say one may escape unchanged, but their nature also helps set the tone as well as the phase of the moon, so far the changes have been under the full moon..,

Interesting, very interesting indeed.
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Blaze » Mon Aug 30, 2010 4:56 am

This method, though unorthodox, works much better! Though maybe you should copy-paste it from Word or something to take advantage of the spellchecker.
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Re: Darkwood Forest Captions

Postby Marky » Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:13 am

*nod* I agree with Blaze on that...although I'm not sure whether or not the iPhone can get Word or not. XD
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