by Brnin8r » Wed Oct 08, 2008 3:01 pm
(The bullet 'bothers you some'? No...a fly bothers you some, a bullet through the heart does far more. Anyway...)
Max's shots aim true to a number of girls who had aimed at Shawn, downing five on the spot. The bus' ceiling has collapsed another half foot.
Arthur's rounds also down two soldiers as he escapes from the depot.
So...people inside the bus are Ashton and...well Ashton... Silva's on the ground, Surge and Shawn are on their way out along with Dan, Max, and Arthur.
The pursuers slowly catch up to Julian about the time he gets over the hill,
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The helicopter continues lowering until it's hovering a few feet off the ground. The doors are opened wide and the commander begins ushering the troops out. "Move move move!" Outside the helicopter is a disaster area; toppled cars, broken buildings, and craters as far as the eye can see. A number of boys begins firing at the helicopter from a far range, hitting one of the girls as she steps out of the bird, falling straight on her face.
It's not about how much dough you make -- it's about how delicious a pizza you eat at the end.
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