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Kerina's Writing Prompt 1

Postby Cutey Kerina » Tue Feb 07, 2006 6:41 pm

Ok, first one. Length may vary depending on how long you want but here is the idea.

A person has just woken up to a surprising change in them. Gender, age, species, human to inanimate, etc. Write what their first thoughts are. You may use whatever style you wish to best express this ^^
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Postby Arkain » Tue Feb 07, 2006 8:50 pm

Poifect!
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Thu Feb 09, 2006 10:41 pm

(I hope I do this right. Did I do this right? ^_^; )

When you felt your faculties boot up, you were met with peculiar sensations. You could hardly describe it, and not just because you had just awoken to them. In fact, you felt wide awake; though, for some reason, you couldn't open your eyes no matter how much you tried.

But your focus on your eyes was quickly deterred as you felt yourself gripped, and (as strange as you knew it sounded when you thought about it) it also felt like you were swaying almost weightlessly. And just when you were beginning to feel bewildered, having moved past the initial state of confusion, you felt yourself being contorted and cinched in ways you've never felt before, the places where you were gripped seeming to be the cause of the whole sensory experience. And you couldn't even tell where your head began and your feet ended! No matter how much you tried you couldn't place exactly where your body felt cinched or what part was bent and which was left hanging. It was if your familiarity with your body had become moot.

"Ah, yes," You heard some girl say, sounding self-satisfied. "You make a wonderful ribbon; the perfect hair ornament if I do say so myself."

At first you wondered as to whom they were speaking to, and again you tried to open your eyes. But as before you were unable to open your eyes; you couldn't even feel them. You began to panic.

"I hope that this teaches you to not move so fast on a girl again, especially me."

This time you noticed how you heard the girl speaking to you, whom you now realized was your girlfriend. It was as if your whole body picked up the audio. You could distinctly tell that, instead of what you were accustomed to, your entire body seemed to resonate with vibrations and registered them as sounds.

As you began to realize your situation, you began to go into denial. You couldn't sense your arms or legs, not even your mouth. It seemed as if you could feel them but they weren't really there; they were almost phantom-like. But you tried to use them anyway, even as you couldn't help putting more pieces of the puzzle together, feeling the hair that you were cinched around and swayed among as well as the shape your body was in now that you were aware of what your body now was.

Your mind screamed in horror when you felt a hand caressing the dangling, forked ends of your body.

"I think I like you better this way."

By now you were convinced that it was just a horrible nightmare and, reason failing you, you began to try and will yourself awake. To no avail.
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Postby Chibi MitchellTF » Fri Feb 10, 2006 3:21 am

After a rather successful attempt at hypnosis, though admitedly purely mental, I made this up. One joke stretches the border of 'sexual', but it was the basic idea in the first place!

Catgirl Hypnosis

It was a normal day, on a normal high school campus. At least, that was what it was normally. However, this day would soon change. A single student, Carl Roberts, would be the cause of the complete transformation. Thanks to a visit to a hypnotist, last night. He had expressed a few doubts, and got put into a trance. He couldn’t remember much of it, but…
The lump on his bed squirmed. He, though that adjective didn’t exactly apply, snapped awake. Carl’s head was covered by his mattress. His head wasn’t on the pillow, either. He sighed, and pushed it to the edge. He wiggled out of bed, surprised that his limbs felt so loose.
His feet hit the floor without a sound. He did a few stretches, because he still felt funny. His T-shirt was itching something fierce, and his boxers felt a little lose. He hiked them up, and padded over to the door. He really, really had to pee. And his butt felt funny.
It took him two tries to reach the doorknob. It was larger than he remembered. His groggy mind couldn’t put things together. He opened it, and walked across the hall. People were staring at him, as he mumbled a hello. He heard a faint whispering from every door. Somebody was snoring, something stank, the window was cracked open. A ton of stuff was happening, it seemed. Even at such an early time.
He got to the restroom, and pushed it open. He felt a shiver run across his body as bare feet hit tile. It was COLD! He walked to the urinal, and his hand went to get ready. He realized he couldn’t feel it, and there was something funny. His hand slipped into…
“OH!â€
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Postby Cutey Kerina » Fri Feb 10, 2006 7:20 am

*claps* ^^ *nods* quite lovely for both (pretty fearful ribbonness) and nice start for maybe a full story with Mitchell's ^^ *cheers on*
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Postby Chibi MitchellTF » Fri Feb 10, 2006 7:09 pm

:D

*sees mouse*

"NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA-NYA"

*Sound of explosions*
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Postby Arkain » Sun Feb 12, 2006 3:26 am

Totally didn't get that part at the end.
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Postby Chibi MitchellTF » Sun Feb 12, 2006 3:29 am

End of mine is an inside joke. Kenji/Bakuryu from Bloody Roar, and Uriko were Aeternalaed, and then disguised as hypnotists.
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