I meant the overall presentation.  You know, the image combined with the words.  If there are a lot of technical mistakes, no matter how good the combination of image and narration is, or how well-written the storylet is, it will distract people.  I know it does me, anyway.
kelbywhatley wrote:Guendolen wrote:Nice work, especially for a first try.  Just please try to capitalize, okay?  Not that it hurts the content, but it can be a little distracting and thus draw attention away from your actual work.  And we all know no one wants that.
what from the drawing or the words? im confused lol.