I'm gonna give this a shot...

[neochikara]

Hello everyone! I've been browsing these forums for months, reading and viewing everyone's great works. It's all very impressive and I must say that I've been inspired to do some real public work in this field of fiction. I'm no newbie to the TG niche, but I haven't tried captioning images for this sort of content before. So, I'm putting myself out on a limb here and giving this a shot.

Now, one of the four I'm posting I do have a bit of concern about because of content, but after some personal thought, I figure that, due to the typical saturation of sexuality in today's society, it shouldn't be too bad. Now, if a Moderator has a problem, please let me know and I'll be more than happy to oblige and get rid of it pronto. I do want to keep the friendly, all-age enviroment going around here (yes, I did read the rules--recently!).

Anyway, without further adue, here's my first contributions to this cyber-establishment and a big hello to you people.

(I never intended to save the captions as JPG files, but due to constraints on Photobucket's side, I'm forced to do so. I would've preferred PNG.)

This would sure beat 'Vista.

Magical leggings...?

It's poisoned!

Temptation strikes!

I encourage creative critique and comments. Thanks for viewing my captions, I'll have more when more inspiration hits me (either that or a car).

::edit::

URLs fixed.

[Grey-Bara]

2-4 are good but 1 is something awful

[neochikara]

2-4 are good but 1 is something awful

Mmm, right. Thank you for the comment. I'll keep that in-mind and strive to do much better next time!

[Kumi-chan]

They are all pretty good but the first one does seem a bit lacking.

[Jeanette]

Same thing everyone else has said so far...but the first one isn't that bad..it shows that windows can be awsome

[Mitera Nikkou]

The first one makes me think of the lengths Microsoft would go to to make their OS seem better/more appealing than it is. XD;;

They were good, overall. And I think (as a mod) that the content, while suggestive, is fine. But don't take my word for it... I could be framing you!

[Hira Kanaki]

The first one was decent though the others were good, at least that's how I thought it was.

[neochikara]

Thanks for all the positive comments! Yeah, I did end up feeling that my first one was a bit weak. My initial idea for it was pretty neat, but I don't think I used the right words. I did intend for it to be short and sweet, but meh... Can't win them all, right?

I plan to do more when I find another good source of captionable pictures (already drew from Shuffle! and it's semi-sequel, Tick-Tack!). Look forward to those.

[Sierra_Rune]

If you're looking for more captionable pictures, this thread could be usefull to you.

[Hira Kanaki]

Or sometimes you can use picture references to RP's...I know I've done that.

[Ninian]

Hmm... I'm caught between the weirdness of seeing pictures from an anime you know of that involves Mazoku (Shuffle!) and the awesomeness of second person captioneering o_o

[Marcman2020]

4th one is my personal fav >.> but yeah, 1 is lacking

[neochikara]

Oh man... What a wait, sorry. I've been collecting pictures here and there, planning and scheming to caption them, but I haven't had a whole lot of time till now to actually do them. Meh, two less story ideas swirling around in my head, and two more captions for you to view. Plus, I used Photoshop this time, so the quality is much better, but still reduced a little due to Photobucket's constraints.

Anyway, here they are:

Caution: Falling Objects.

A Second Development

Once again, I think I may be pushing the rules a bit with the second one, but it shouldn't be that bad. I'm probably just worrying too much again. But really, my biggest complaint is that I feel like these captions (especially the second one) require like a short story or something to feel "complete". They're okay like this, but they call out for a little back story, or something. I guess you could call that a side-effect of being an author.

Speaking of which, I'm thinking about submitting my novel here. It is TG, and always has been, but I've never gotten around to it. Maybe I will some time soon.

Anyway, thanks for your comments so far! I look forward to reading some new ones and getting some suggestions and such. Yep, till then, folks.

[Mistress Guendolen]

I like both of them. You tell a good narrative. And the falling objects notion was just plain fun. Why don't you write full stories for at least one of them? A good tale is always nice to have around.

[Chibi MitchellTF]

I'd second good stories!