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Postby alebann » Fri Mar 04, 2005 12:32 am

Good stuff. I think I like "wish" the best.
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Postby Sentaiga » Fri Mar 04, 2005 4:58 am

I liked the Magic acadamey one. The ones I like are the Non-Bad-boy-to-Good-girl types. I have trouble empathsizing with those who "Deserve it" ^_^ I like your choice in pictures.
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Postby Kumi-chan » Fri Mar 04, 2005 10:47 am

Nice work I love them all. I was wondering. Can I use the girl in this one http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/esilvereye/146bd5ca.jpg as an avatar one time?
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Postby Joh » Fri Mar 04, 2005 11:09 am

I'm trying not to get too hog wild posting here...

But I want to say you're one of the most natural talents I've seen at Captioneering. Every story is concise, well laid out, and makes good use of both long and short text. If this is your first, I'm impressed.
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Postby Joh » Fri Mar 04, 2005 11:12 am

Though you might want to switch up themes a bit ^^; Too many seem to result in the same end. That's my only complaint. If you want to specialize, I'm not discouraging it (I specialize in several types of exclusive TF captions) but it'd make your audience wider.
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Fri Mar 04, 2005 3:19 pm

Not much I can say... I mean, it's more because I come across these kind of captions more often than not. ^_^; But your grammar and spelling is decent, and the stories aren't too complicated or confusing. And it's probably just me, but there was a little lack of identification between image and story for some of them... I guess I'm hung up on solid connections, which is a style in itself. >.<
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Postby Sakraida82 » Fri Mar 04, 2005 3:59 pm

Wow that's alot of them. And don't be so scrutinizing Evil.
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Postby opus` » Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:10 pm

I liked Wish the best, too. Neat captions all round, though. ^^
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Postby ElanaSilvereye » Fri Mar 04, 2005 5:53 pm

well thanks '^ ^ there is a certin kind of caption I like as far as style or story gos, I wanted to try and keep them fairly simple just cause i've been turned off by some captions that seemed more like short stories set images than a caption. I don't min dim you use the images, i mean they arent mine after all heh. And I've seen other captions that try to hard to connect themselves to the images, even though I might be guilty of that here.
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Fri Mar 04, 2005 8:04 pm

I was being a critic, Alex. O.o Few say exactly what they see in captions from their own personal view, and that's what I did.

And as far as personal views goes, we all have our own. I generally like all captions because of the effort alone, and a bit more so if the grammar and spelling is good. But one of the tastes I like, is variety. And it shows in my own captions. I do what I like, others do what they like; we all have something we favor in captions. Here, I enjoyed ElanaSilvereye's captions for the most part, with the exception being that there was a recurring theme in most. It's not supposed to be taken personally.
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Postby Duck » Wed Mar 16, 2005 5:31 am

Very nice work. Everything is pretty clear story wise (though sometimes word choice could be just slightly better) but they ar all very very good.
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Postby Sierra_Rune » Wed Mar 16, 2005 9:54 am

I like them a lot... Your tone is very good, as is your picture and word choice. ^^
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