Taralynn's Desk

[Taralynn]

All right!

Chapter 3 is up!

This one wasn't as fun to write as the last too because we now officially know more than the character. But this chapter had to happen. Chapter 4 should be more fun of a write. I hope Chapter 3 is still intriguing though. Comments are appreciated!

[Amy-chan]

I can't believe that nobody has commented yet. I really like your writing. The little snippets of the other characters besides the main ones leave me wanting to know about them also.

So, when is chapter 4 coming? Soon? please? *makes eyes all big*


>EDIT<

Chapter 4 is up! Joy! *reads ravenously*

[Taralynn]

Yes, as Amy-chan has stated, Chapter 4 of Magical Girl Policy is up. I just posted it today. It's considerably larger than the past chapters so I hope it doesn't last to long.

So go ahead and give me your thoughts and if you notice any errors with spelling or obvious punctuation or grammar errors, please send me a PM of what the error is. I don't have an editor so I self edit this thing, but if anyone has ever written a paper, you're typically your own worst editor because you know what it's supposed to say so you sometimes.

Anyway, I'll stop rambling before I start spoiling things

[UDDCommander]

I like it, nice comedic touches. So far it's been all set up, that's not really a bad thing though it leads to some questions. Like what's gonna happen between Cory, Eli and Robert.

Very good, keep it up.

[Amy-chan]

If anybody cares, (and you should, it is a fun read and a good one too,) Chapter 5 of Taralynn's Magical Girl Policy is up.

Go read it or the talking wallaby will bite you! (Or maybe kick you, that could be worse.)

[Terri Violet Tsukino]

Congrats on finishing Chapter 6. I haven't read everything you've written yet, but I've become very interested in the story from what I have.^_^

[Taralynn]

Well, it's been a while since I posted, but at the request of Kyunji I'm going to post again. In recent months I've posted
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
and yesterday I posted Chapter 9 of Magical Girl Policy.
The last chapter was 14 pages long for me. An absolute megachapter for me. That's about twice as big as any of the other chapters. I feel this last chapter I wrote was some of my best writing ever. I put in an action sequence that I was very proud of because I don't normally write action.

Well, feel free to leave your comments.

[Lanzerus]

i really enjoyed the raven one, and the crew shift, i still haven't finished the one with the arcade...also, through out the page i get random japanese characters that are there, nvm, i just had the worng encoding setting

[Gee-chan]

Nicely done Taralynn and WOOT pictures again!!

No really. That latest one was a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the great work!

[Travesty]

I read through your stories the other day, and I gotta say I really enjoyed them. Thanks for the writing, and keep up the good work.

[UDDCommander]

Magical Girl Policy is one of, if not the best story I have read in a very long time and I look forward to reading more of it and the rest of your stories.

[Taralynn]

Thanks for the compliment Commander.

Well, everyone can be happy again because Magical Girl Policy Chapter 10 is now up! Wooo! Double digits.
Surely a sign of greatness <-- is not serious about that

My biggest worry with this chapter was that the dialogue would become tedious. Please let me know what you think.

Oh, and my usual begging for emails, and fan art should happen right about here
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PLEASE GIVE ME YOUR THOUGHTS!
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There, that outta do it. Heehee! Let me know what you think.

[Shadowmaster]

I liked the chapter. The dialouge wasn't tedious, I actually found it quite amusing. A great chapter in my opinion, hope to see more from ya.

[Taralynn]

This isn't really a major update, but an artist named Kamizite has drawn a picture of Robynne for me and it's now posted on the site. Maybe I should instead put this up on the Art page.

[Gee-chan]

Hey not bad, not quite sure why she's whistling (it doesn't seem like Rob to whistle, or perhaps that's just me) but oh well.

Need more chapters.........braaaaains...