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My story

Postby Funny Hat + Funny Accent » Thu Dec 07, 2006 4:31 pm

I've been working on a story since mid-August. and going to be posting it here on MSF before anywhere else. That being said, I haven't gotten to far into the story, partially because a thinking block and an extreme lack of time thanks to school work. However, I will be posting what I have typed up, only part of the Prologue so far, within the next week. Any helpful tips would be welcome before and after that point.
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Postby Arkain » Thu Dec 07, 2006 10:29 pm

Well, you don't seem to have any spelling issues.
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Postby Funny Hat + Funny Accent » Fri Dec 08, 2006 7:07 pm

No, that has never been one of my problems, to be sure.
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Postby Funny Hat + Funny Accent » Tue Mar 06, 2007 6:30 pm

Finally got around to actually typing it up, somewhat. Here's a little blurb from my most recent rewrite of it:

Return to Oblivion:
Version Three-Chapter One “In Medias Resâ€
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