Magical Sailor Fuku

A thread to talk about the story. I started it in November as a NaNoWriMo work. There are some pretty extensive parts to follow. But I'm glad I could get all the stuff I've actually written out for people to see.

It is very interesting, though some things confuse me at present. But I'll wait to see if I can work those out as things progress. And the characters seem a little too human... Not a bad thing, but it's somewhat surreal. XD Though, at this point, there's still room to discover more about them. Besides that, the technical side of things are good; I didn't have a problem reading/understanding any of it.

Also, I'm kind of surprised that Terry/Terri/Theresa and I are alot alike in alot of ways. Except I'm alot more reclusive, doubtful and indecisive. ^_^;

I can't wait for the next part. ^o^ So gimme! ;p

A very beautiful story thus far, dear mother. I can't wait to see more!

the characters are all alive and seem so real. that means, despite the fact that there're sci-fi-elements involved, you get a feeling of reality here - i'm bad at compliments *gobblegobble*

and with such people around me, i'd like to try that snake-skin for once...
well, at least invent that thing first... you don't have any special top-secret-connections? ...no? ...really? oh come on...


i'm looking forward to much more lines Kerina

I love the story so far, and want to read more real soon. The characters are so real! *hugs Kerina* You rock at writing Mommy.

Finally finished Chapter 1, must read Chapter 2, and will Chapter 3 be done by then?

Will you finish reading around Christmas? ^^;;; If not, then no.

My big project is Mecchen House right now. Longer than Hatchlings. Not quite as much zappy but I feel the characters are really good.

Yay! I get a christmas present of a zappy story!

Cute optimist ^^. I'm just hoping I can get my stuff together to finish the tale.