Let's Write a Story (Project)

Guen, Garath! I have not forgotten. The story project I have started IS going somewhere.
I present you with the beta. I'm not entirely satisfied with this yet and it's not quite done, but this is about what I was talking about.
[quote]
The game was minutes away and unfortunately, Mackenzie wouldn’t be attending. Still wearing her cheerleading uniform, she adorned her leather jacket, slid off her sneakers and put on her steel-toed boots. Mac sat on a locker room bench in silence as her squad filed out into the gym.
“It’s not fair…â€
I present you with the beta. I'm not entirely satisfied with this yet and it's not quite done, but this is about what I was talking about.
[quote]
The game was minutes away and unfortunately, Mackenzie wouldn’t be attending. Still wearing her cheerleading uniform, she adorned her leather jacket, slid off her sneakers and put on her steel-toed boots. Mac sat on a locker room bench in silence as her squad filed out into the gym.
“It’s not fair…â€