Beta Reader and something else...

[IQSymphic]

Just wondering if I can get a beta reader to help me with my story? Well I already have it going and have posted it already but my current reader (although excellent) is kind of slow at doing what he does and I'm also curious to get another opinion on it.

Also can I post the link to the story here or should I post it on the archive section?

[Moonlit Naiad]

None of the archive rooms should allow new postings, so here's a good place to put it.

I can't promise I'd have time to look at until towards the end of the month (school, work, schoolwork, and then taking a break from brainwork as soon as the quarter is over), but there's a few people here that are likely to. ^.^

[Yamigalence]

I'd be more than happy to beta read it for you. Just send me a link for it or even email it to me and I read it immediately.

[IQSymphic]

I guess I can post a link here then...all reviews (from constructive criticisms to anything else) are welcome...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1988249/1/

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2477503/1/

My first story is a bit weak at first but I guess it gets good later on...the second one I treasure...