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Blaze now attempting stories!

Postby Blaze » Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:26 am

Yes! I am branching out into short stories with TG!

Here is my first. o.o

Moving Up in the World
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Re: Blaze now attempting stories!

Postby Marky » Sun Nov 21, 2010 4:41 pm

Pretty good story, Blaze! I almost wish I could see what happens next after that. XD
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Re: Blaze now attempting stories!

Postby Blaze » Mon Nov 22, 2010 1:38 am

New one!

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I've been told I tend to focus on the TF more than the plot. I'll try to fix that in future. >.>
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Re: Blaze now attempting stories!

Postby Marky » Tue Nov 23, 2010 10:22 am

Even though I read this last night and forgot to give my opinion on it, I thought it was honestly better than the first one. You definitely had a good story to go along with it, and at the end made me want more. XD
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Re: Blaze now attempting stories!

Postby Blaze » Tue Nov 23, 2010 7:19 pm

And a third! Now with meatier plot!

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Now we will see if the plot is like Prime Rib or if it's more like Spam. >.>
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Re: Blaze now attempting stories!

Postby Marky » Tue Nov 23, 2010 8:48 pm

Hm, I think you're constantly improving, bit by bit, with your stories! Keep up the good work!
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