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Overlord Bob commissions.

Postby ZeroForever » Tue Sep 21, 2010 8:59 am

Commissioned a series of comics, I've been linking them on various sites already but since this room is fairly dead thought I would do a central link here.

web/blog address
http://overlordbobsuniverse.blogspot.com/

deviant list
Intro. Ian S - done http://tran4of3.deviantart.com/#/d31ybb4
1. Mr.DNA - done http://mr-dna.deviantart.com/#/d2z5dgh
2. Mr.DNA - done http://mr-dna.deviantart.com/art/Overlo ... 504?q=&qo=
3. CrazyCowProduction - done http://crazycowproductions.deviantart.c ... /#/d308cs6 http://crazycowproductions.deviantart.c ... /#/d308cxd or http://crazycowproductions.deviantart.c ... /#/d30kts5
4/5. 7-car-pileup - hiatus
6. Mr.DNA - done http://mr-dna.deviantart.com/art/Overlo ... 904?q=&qo=
7. Blackshirtboy - done http://blackshirtboy.deviantart.com/#/d2z9f26
8. Powerman2000 - done http://powerman2000.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d324wgr http://powerman2000.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d324wtn
9. Mr.DNA - done http://mr-dna.deviantart.com/#/d2z2y56
End. Ian S - done http://tran4of3.deviantart.com/art/Over ... 655?q=&qo=
http://tran4of3.deviantart.com/art/Over ... 893?q=&qo=
http://tran4of3.deviantart.com/art/Over ... 961?q=&qo=

Extra hero 1. Blackshirtboy - done http://blackshirtboy.deviantart.com/art ... rtboy&qo=0

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Commission Concept
Background format would be like generic fantasy paper scroll
Title/concept
Overlords and Epic Heroes

Running narrator quotes will occur throughout; I’ll post them with ' ' on each panel/page/scene if there are any.
(number of panels obviously subject to change, as I’m just giving an overview)
(If you want more details on characters, just let me know in general I'm going for the stereotypes)
Concept summary (super simplified!)- Fantasy setting world, MC is the overlord. Story starts off introducing Overlord + heroes. Overlord then splits heroes group. Overlord uses various means to defeat/tf the heroes. Post scene, it turns out it was a xanatos gambit by another rival to defeat the MC overlord. TF's the MC. Heroes still tf'ed however are partially freed as a result of the tf fight other overlord. MC freed defeats the rival with the power of love and yuri, other overlord tfed as well. Epilogue the world is in a new era of peace...



Master narrator ‘Once upon a time there was an Evil Overlord Bob that ruled half the known world (the other half was controlled by the Dark Sorcerer Tim). Bob's conquest plans were going according to plan until one day some Epic Heroes appeared, these pesky heroes somehow not only defeated Bob's legions of darkness but were currently breaking into his castle as we speak.'
Panel 1 -will have a view of the Overlord in a dark throne room, standard evil knight gear with the horned helm with T shaped visor that prevents his face from being seen sitting on a throne. In his hands you can see him reading a scroll the sound effects of destruction in the background.
Mini-panel close up of the scroll 'Evil Overlords for Dummies: Heroes edition' can be seen inscribed on it. Bob reading the scroll 'First off, booby trap the entrance, the first plan of attack is the separate the heroes. While together they have the skill set to defeat anything you throw at them.' bottom of panel has explosion sound effect.
mini panel - will have the shadows of the group of heroes streaming through the smashed open ruins of the castles gates.
Large panel 3 - Bob snapping his finger, heroes (I’ll list out the heroes separately) with a surprised look/reaction as a magic circle/traps separate all of them.
Bob reading the scroll ‘If they've all been successfully separated proceed to chapter 2 on how to deal with each of them.'
Panel 4 - Elsewhere you can see a cloaked figure hunched over crystal ball, in a chamber he begins to laugh, however the laughter looks like the giggling of a school girl. ‘cough interrupting laughter’ followed by mumbling ‘god damn curse always ruins my scenes’.
Page end.

Hero 1 –
Male human Wizard– traditional concept of the old male magic user, aka – a Caucasian old man with long beard grey hair, pointy hat, staff, and blue robes.
Sequence – wizard to AR/TG self to bunny girl

Bob reading the scroll ‘The Wizard – The old crinkled man of the group, though frail he honestly poses the largest danger in terms of destructive capabilities with magical fireballs that level buildings and spells that turn your dragons into newts. Under no circumstances do you want to confront him directly even with anti-magic armor, instead the most effective method is to make him deal with himself. Confining him in small rooms with items that hypnotize are ideal for this purpose.'
Bob thinks up item Mirror of Illusions - an oval shaped full sized mirror with a disco ball head at the top.
panel 1 - the wizard wakes up is still normal, is cautiously looking around a medium size empty room when his eyes look into the mirror and gets the swirly hypnotized eyes.
panel 2 -has the wizard casting a spell at the mirror and the spell bouncing off zapping himself the transformation beginning. Angle the mirror so that the viewer can see a portion of what the mage thinks he’s seeing aka the overlord.
panel 3-4th - wizard changes into youthful female, version of himself, clothes remain the same
panel 5th - wizard chats a super spell and hits the mirror with the beam, the mirror breaks/explodes and scatters the magic everywhere in the room.
panel 6-8th - wizard’s clothes turn into a bunny suit, gains bunny characteristics, eyes get the ‘dull’ scatter brained vacant look.
panel 9 - wizard fully transformed is nuzzling the overlords arm while Bob is reading the scroll with the other his helmet in a happy face mood
Bob reading the scroll 'In most cases, expect the room and mage to blow up as most mages are pyro's. However the results may vary as mages may possess any number of alternative spells.'
page end

Hero 2 –
Male middle age human Priest – Stereotypical D&D male priest with white robes and blue folds, fairly slim, blond hair, brown eyes, glasses, carries a mace, wears a one of those ugly cleric hats.
Sequence Priest to Demoness.

Bob reading from the scroll ‘Priest – The most annoying hero while in a group; however there isn’t much to fear from a solo priest unless your undead which case you probably should start running. Otherwise just make sure to gag there mouth to prevent Epic class martyr prayers. Priests however are ideal for demonic sacrifices though if the souls are too pure the demon in question may backstab you. If this is an issue it would be ideal to make you own via corruption.’
Bob thinks up item ‘Soul Breaker’ – small crystal ball looks like there’s a flame inside it.
Panel 1 - priest is chained to the wall, though loose enough to move around slightly his limbs are still spread like a X. Also gagged but he’s normal otherwise, scene has the Overlord pushing the ball into his body via the belly button.
Panel 2 - priest starts off resisting the change, the overlord meanwhile pulls out all kinky toys from the closet.
Bob reading from the scroll ‘sometimes if particularly strong willed, you may need to take direct action to move it along’
Panels 3-8th - the overlord whips him in response, each strike he transforms more and more into a demoness, if viable the overlord uses some of the other toys to push along major/final portions of his transformation, paddling, tickling, breast clamps, etc... Priest’s shouts start off rebellious and turn into pleasure by the end.
Panel 9 - fully transformed demoness seated leaning against the leg of the overlord. Bob reading from the scroll ‘If using the corruption method do note that you must regularly reinforce your will upon them lest they stray, otherwise enjoy.’
page end

Hero 3 –
Male Dwarf Warrior– Stereotypical male dwarf, short, stubby limbs, heavily armored, wields an axe; honestly most dwarves would fit this.
Sequence Dwarf to Slime girl.

Bob reading from the scroll ‘Dwarf Warrior – Like a normal warrior, except with bloodlust, magic resistance, and stronger than an ogre. If a dwarf warrior has reached your castle, chances are you do not want to be dueling them as they will decked out in dwarven made epic gear. All dwarves of this type though have a major weakness, epic armor doesn’t befit swimming, so if the dwarf was able to do a resist roll against the magic trap, there’s always the standard pitfall. After you dunk him assuming he didn’t choose the drown option, we recommend using his wet equipment-less status against him.’
Bob thinks up item ‘Puni mix‘- it essential looks like a rainbow colored Jell-O powder packet.
panel 1 - shows the dwarf underwater struggling stripping off his heavier outer armor and dropping his weapons under the water.
Panel 2 – shows the overlord pouring the mixing into the toilet and flushing. Meanwhile the dwarf now armor-less is getting sucked into a whirl pool as a result.
Panel 3 – dwarf dizzy eyed, is still in water but only waist high now, the water is rainbow colored and very hot as steam blocks his view of everything around him.
Panels 4-8 – He rages as he runs through the steam clouds towards what seems to be a door (blurry silhouette), however the color from the water seems to melt into his skin, his body seems to lose its composition as he transforms into a slime girl. His rage changing to scatterbrain things as his brain also turns to slime as well making him bubbly dumb. Eventually reaching the silhouette which turns out to be mirror she’s fully transformed and giggling like a bimbo.
panel 9 - scene has the slime girl glomping a statue of the overlord… crushing it with said grip. Bob slightly hidden reading the scroll ‘Dwarves even without weapons should be taken seriously as epic level ones still retain monstrous strength capably of splitting the earth, that and they have a stubborn streak a mile long regardless of their situation so be wary of biting off more than you can chew.’
page end

Heroes 4 & 5 –
Female Elf ranger and Human Male Barbarian – stereotypes, elf is pointy eared, long blond hair, green eyes, patch leather armor, wields a bow, ageless beauty. Barbarian is a giant of a man, like 7 foot, curly black hair, black eyed, handsome, super muscular man, like Conan.
Sequence into a conjoined cerebus anthro.

Bob reading from the scroll ‘Occasionally a pair of the heroes will hook up, if there’s a female elf in the party the chances she’s sleeping with one of the guys is honestly pretty astronomical. If it’s happened this is pretty obvious usually by male’s proximity and how overprotective the male is against threats towards the female. In situations like this it would be easier to kill 2 birds with one stone so we’ll keep them together. The trick is to manipulate their love, so any sort of love amplifier such as love potions and such will easily push the pair into lust beyond caring.’
Bob thinks up item ‘Body Wax made from soylent green with a dash of Venus’ looks like a set of pink humanoid shaped candles.
Panel 1 – The pair have hearts in their eyes, to busy making out with each other to notice the body wax candles lit, burning strange heart shaped fumes into the air. Meanwhile the elf’s wolf pet tries to nudge the female out of it.
Panel 2 – the pair completely ignores the animal to busy stripping/making out, the wolf now sniffing around finds the candles and quickly knocks them over.
Panel 3 – Wolf runs back to the pair trying to get in-between them to split them up, the knocked over candles now burning each other indiscriminately, the wax of the candles melting together.
Panel 4 - 8 –the 3 find themselves melting together, limbs joining into a singular set of larger paw hands and feet, multi-boob, futa (not needed but just so there is one), fur covering them, and heads forming into similar feminine anthro lupine faces. In the end they fuses together to make a large singular body cerebus girl, the candle now shows the same as well.
Panel 9 – the 3 heads are making out, while sitting in the casual hind leg dog position, from the merged section is a collar with a leash that is in the overlord’s hand. Bob reads from the scroll with a eww face on his helmet, dog drool on it ‘While the idea to keep the elf for other purposes is tempting, it would be safer to spend the night at the local brothel. To note that over the course of their 1000 year life spans the average elf ‘maiden’ will catch up to 10+ different STD’s.’
page end

Hero 6 –
Human Prince/Royal/Paladin - long blond hair, blue eyes, handsome, wearing shining white armor, with shining sword, crown, sparkle teeth, etc...
Sequence Male to female maid

Bob reading the scroll ‘The Prince/Paladin – Your arch Nemesis, in terms of skills or abilities he is easily the lowest in the band of heroes but with destiny on his side, charisma, and a legendary sword his overall threat level is Retreat!!. However like all royals ego is are there greatest weakness, unless they've already defeated there shadow... which case you’re screwed and likely need to restart. Ideally though you need rig the fight with their shadow however possible, otherwise they become unstoppable.'
Bob thinks up 'Inverted chamber' - room where things are is reversed ex - light is dark and dark is light sun shines darkness, shadows provide light (honestly probably weird to draw)
panel 1 - Prince wakes up in the inverted chamber, the actual room itself looks like a bed room however he can’t control his body, instead he finds that he has to mimic his shadow instead of the normal.
panel 2 – SPrince (shadow prince) proceeds to the mirror in the wall, RPrince (real prince) like a shadow is forced mimic his shadows motions. RPrince struggles in vain, while the shadow taunts him.
Panel 3 – SPrince’s strips his clothing while RPrince must do the same as a result [unequipped - master sword, imperial crown, etc...] text appears on the side, and SPrince proceeds to throw them out the window, RPrince follows curses him out futility as he laminates the how hard it was to get them.
Panel 4 – SPrince’s now naked scrounges through the drawers, closet and the rest of the room making a pile of stuff random junk. RPrince has to do the same but is confused at what exactly he’s grabbing.
Panel 5-6 – SPrince’s body starts dressing in some of the items he picked up as the prince does the same [equip girdle of femininity, cow cup bra, slave collar, etc….]. RPrince fumes in horror and embarrassment at what he was being made to wear.
Panel 7-9 – RPrince is now dressed like a French maid and his body morphs accordingly, while changing SPrince forces him to make a concoction and then forces him to eat it [use – will suppressant, lust draft, etc...]. RPrince screams against it but as after each drug she becomes more and more complacent/broken.
Panel 10 – Show’s the bimbo happy drugged Prince facing off with her shadow, lighting is again normal indicating it’s outside the chamber.
Panel 11 – Fully transformed prince, with reddish eyes serving a drink to the overlord on the throne. Bob reading from the scroll while taking a sip ‘Once the shadow win the ego/will/hope of the Prince will crumble accordingly, depending on how violent the battle was all that will remain will either be a dead corpse, a brain dead puppet, or a prefect servant.’
page end

Hero 7 –
Male Halfling Rogue - stereotypical middle age curly brown hair, brown eyes, white skinned, midget (about 3 feet tall), leather vest/armor, dagger/short sword, mildly dirty/grimy.
Sequence into Vampiress

Bob reading from the Scroll ‘The Halfling Rogue – there is only 1 word to describe this hero 'coward'. Needless to say out of all the heroes he is least heroic but also the most cunning, chances are he won’t fall for any traps and instead went straight for your treasury while you dealt with the other heroes. Needless to say with his epic save rolls he’ll never fall for normal traps, so if you want to deal with him you’ll need have something that will invoke his greed so much that it’ll outweigh his self preservation instinct.'
Bob thought up item ‘Blood Diamond' giant person size white diamond.
Panel 1 - rogue is sneaking around treasure room and passes by a huge person size chest that has a note on it 'OVERLORD ONLY' scoffing "like I'm going to fall for that" before looking at chest self justifying it "Well maybe just a little peak", proceeds to break the lock and opens the chest.
Panel 2 - chest open the diamond inside awe-stuck by the size of it, $ signs in his eyes he walks over and hugs the diamond saying something generic like "come to papa."
Panel 3 - hugging the diamond his body seemingly passes through the surface as he gets trapped inside.
Panel 4-8 - the diamond turns a crimson red tint, his body all the while seems to get paler and gaunt as the fluids are getting sucked out, reverse body begins to grow in every way, clothes ripping apart easily, his flesh regains its volume however in completely different areas (boobies etc), fang teeth growing, finally transforming into a crimson haired vampiress. Diamond shatters as the transformation is complete.
Panel 9 - Vampiress is running away flirt fully, holding a piece of cloth which is Bob's boxers, Bob's still in armor looking annoyed is chasing after her while reading the scroll with a side glance 'It's highly suggested for your own sanity that you dispose of the Halfling in a permanent manner, even when well behaved the urge to steal is irresistible to them.'
Page end

Hero 8 –
Elderly Male Elf Druid - Elf old enough that his hairs are grey, giant bushy beard, dressed in green leafy robes, aka like a night elf from WoW.
Sequence into AR to cow girl/multi-anthro.

Bob reading the scroll ‘The Elf Druid – a master of transformation and nature this hero is not to be underestimated despite being a hippy. They can call upon the powers of any number of animals using their abilities to augment his own. Though however sharp his instincts are, his hippy nature will have dulled his mind so obviously this is where you should strike.'
Bob thought up Morality Fleas 'like normal fleas but multiple colored, aka multi-colored dots since you really can't see fleas'

Panel 1 - Druid wakes up in what looks like a kitchen, looking around he's appalled to find that what broke his fall was a cow, which now looks like its dead. Chibi morality good/evil shoulder figures appear. Good saying that he should bury it, evil saying just to leave it. Good wins.
mini panel - As he moves to bury it, fleas jump from the cow to him
panel 2 - outside view cow is already buried; druid is holding the bell collar with a name tag on it says a prayer for 'Missy'. Meanwhile his morality figures begin to look ill.
panel 3 - Druid reenters the kitchen, placing the bell on the counter and finds a piece of paper, commenting that it 'looks like a chore list'. Good chibi now has insect antennae’s sticking out of head, suggests that it's his responsibility to do the chores since he killed her, he grudgingly agrees.
panel 4 - druid is sweating from doing the various kitchen chores his devil chibi (more insect like) suggests that he shape shift into a younger form. He resists at first citing it wasn't needed but after looking at the number of remaining chores he relents and shifts younger (20ish), his clothes not fitting he grabs a apron.
panel 5-8- on the list he has 'fill up the milk carton' pondering how he could do that. Good chibi suggests becoming a cow, evil chibi notes that you need hands to do the milking. He settles on midway and hesitantly transforms into an anthro cow girl, the chibi’s egging him on to start milking which he eventual gives in to. End panel before she begins thought bubble of ‘how it feels so good’
panel 9 – [hours later] text. she looks tired and milk container is full, she looks around grabbing at the list, instead grabs the collar. Both chibi's are insect hybrids now and say it's made for her and agreeably she put it's on.
mini-panel – she’s looking at the next chore on the list, all you see is ‘Eggs’.
panel 10 - druid is now cow girl anthro upper side, chicken girl anthro bottom side, still dressed in an apron. Scene has her serving breakfast to the overlord, milk and eggs. Bob reading the scroll 'Druids make for excellent pets once house broken, as they retaining enough of their human intellect to perform tasks, while animal instincts guide the rest.'
page end

Hero 9 –
Male Half elf – (generic DnD traveling mistral) Dirty blond hair, fair complexion, slightly pointed ears, with slight stubble; he's dressed in a clean brown and green tunic, wearing a Woodman's hat, with pantaloons, carrying a lute.
Sequence Bard to Latex cat girl

Bob reading the scroll 'The Bard - once the heroes have reached an epic enough level, they will most assuredly be joined with a bard of sorts. Like the priest the bard is fairly useless once separated from the rest of the group, though unlike the priest he will be fit and will run away from trouble. The simplest manner to trap the a Bard is through the same way he gets his power 'sound', they will usually play music constantly to distract the large monsters and handle the small ones themselves.
Bob thinks up 'Kitty Slimes' small black slimes that look like they’re made of latex and with cat ears and tails.

Panel 1 - shows the bard lost in the sewers, his music seemingly driving away all monsters except for the Kitty slime that is cutely following him.
Panel 2 - shows the bard still playing his music kicking away the slime, but the slime sticks to his leg instead. He tries to shake it off but its firm so he gives up and continues walking/playing.
Panel 3 - bard still playing now has more kitty slimes following him, Bard now looking slightly worried. Meanwhile the slime on his foot seemingly melts into it the foot which is starting to change into a latex paw.
Panel 4-8 - Bard running frantically, legion of kitty slimes trailing him. Pouncing on him one at a time as each part covered begins to change. Eventually he's fully covered and the transformation turns him into a latex cat girl.
Panel 9 - Overlord yelling at the cat girl, who isn't paying too much attention, instead licking her paw, scratched up throne on the side. Bob reading from the scroll 'Bards like most other performers tend to be divas, so it's usually not ideal to capture them as they are the worst type of prisoners and will wreak havoc if attention isn't paid to them.'
page end


Conclusion part 1
honestly it's a bit wordy here but mainly because I have a character with monologues, if it’s too wordy just put ‘blah blah blah’ in the comic and I’ll combine the text into a short story to put into the description.

panel 1 – Semi -group panel with Bob sitting on his throne scroll still in hand however he's at the end of it, the various transformed heroes in various states of service to their new lord.
panel 2 - dark column of flame bursts out from the center of the room from it emerges a slick/handsome black haired man in a trim looking dress suit with a pair of red eyed ravens on his shoulders. Bob speaking in an angry tone "Tim! What do you want."
panel 3 - Tim speaking body/hands moving in flowery motions all the while "Oh can't a rival drop in every once in awhile; I mean I was hoping that the heroes had finished you and I could take them out while they were tired but alas your still standing I see. Anyways I can see your getting impatient with the small talk, so I admit I came here for another reason... I mean you really should check who writes those books."
Mini-panels - cuts to the scroll where it unrolls the bottom of it, Tim's name is signed at the end, a rather complex magic circle on it.
panel 4 - the glowing white scroll bursts into the air as white beams of energy emerge from it as it wraps around Bob mummifying/binding him, the various former heroes glowing as well as if in a trance.
Panel 5 - Bob's form is struggling but surely shrinking within the wrappings
Panel 6 - the wrappings disintegrate and Bob is now a petite white hair, white eyed, pale white girl in an angelic gown with crown however now gagged and chained to the throne. The throne is now a white angelic girly version of what it once was.
Tim monologues "You know it took me a while to think of a way to get rid of you, I mean the heroes were a threat too but you always were the bigger one, with your evil subjugating armor of the overlord. I mean I had no way of stopping you, not that I'd let you know that. So I lent a hand to those bozos that could. Anyways, you must be wondering how I defeated you. You now all that ‘good’ that you broke those heroes of... well the scroll stored it. The purest of good you know all that fun stuff, it just needed some of my special magic to go off, and not even your armor could protect you."
Panel 7 - Tim walks over grabbing the floating scroll then gripping her by the cheeks forcing her to look into his eyes while still speaking "Ah the sweet smell of absolute victory."
part 2
General gist is that the heroes are slightly restored by the spell as well and rally against Tim, obviously this is wordy and I don’t expect the sequences to drawn exactly as is.
Panel 1 – has the heroes waking, Tim’s monologue text box can be seen from the distance, their eyes ‘clear’ aka mental affects are gone.
Mini panel – They look at each other, before simply nodding in understanding.
Panel 2 – Tim’s gloating over bob is interrupted, as the meow mix sound is sung, as he looks he sees the latex cat girl (bard) looking at him, song finishing as [+100 to all status] text appears all around him, suddenly though he’s zapped.
Panel 3-5 – poof tf as he’s suddenly a girl, turning towards the zap source he sees the bunny girl (wizard) having done the deed, motions gathering flame with his hand he’s interrupted as a 2 sets of boobs encase his face in a double glomp, the demoness (priest) and vampires (rogue) try to seduce/eat him from both sides. (Vampiress biting neck from behind, while demoness lip kisses.
Panel 6-8- He blast them away however it still effects him causing exaggerated feminine characteristics, however [magic scroll and boxers stolen] text to appear on the side. Still shaking off the effects, he’s splattered with a liquid (milk) and gets an egg to the face. Stumbling around he mutters some commands to the ravens, while the milk causes BE and lactation.
Panel 9-12 – Tim, removing the egg remains from his vision finds herself stepping on something, looking down it appears to be goo; goo girl (Dwarf) sudden strikes him with a mega uppercut cratering him into the ceiling. He finds himself stuck in the ceiling (more precisely her boobs) as suddenly the maid (prince) combo attacks (prince) wielding a mop [Limit Break – Omni Clean] text on the side. Ends with him getting laid out on the floor “Shouting for his ravens only for them to crash into him featherless white flags out covered with cerebus drool.

Part 3
panel 1 - Tim getting up unleashing a spell of darkness that blows away all the heroes shouting “ENOUGH”, however clearly still transformed/injured from the attacks.
Panel 2 - Tim ‘poof’ changes back to normal (cloths still wreaked though) before chanting an uber spell, everything is bloated out by the light of the spell [casting Ultima] text on the side.
Panel 3 – far pan out he’s the only thing still standing, rest is a smoking cloud covered crater. He does his evil laugh (giggles evilly, like the intro), until a 'creak' is heard from the dust cloud.
Panel 4 – Dust cloud parts, Bob still sitting on the throne queenly however no longer chained/gagged. Says “Stop that, now come here and behave yourself”
Panel 5-6 – Tim blubbering as he walks robotically towards her “This can’t be that power should have dispersed when the armor changed!!! Unless it’s wasn’t the armor!! But what could it be.” He casts [Scan] text on the side, lock on target on Barbie (Bob) [Rolling stats of Barbie’s, ends up focusing on charisma.] Tim screaming in terror “it’s over 9000!!!” gasping how it should be possible as stats cap at 999.
Panel 7 – As Tim approaches Barbie, she so pure that she even has a halo at this point, false pretense of courage he rebuffs her “You’re so pure now you can’t possible do anything to me now can you.” Barbie looking perplexed but idea come to here (light bulb) and simply responses with “Well there is one thing… Will you Marry Me.” Tim looks gab struck, and tries to resist however due to the charisma he eventually gives in and says “Yes”.
Panel 8 - 11– Barbie reaches over and grabs Tim head saying “Oh yeah, I only like girls” before kissing him like the bride. Tim transforms from the lips onwards, turning into beautiful female, his clothing turning into a black wedding dress, his hair a flowing pink color, as heart shaped magic bubbles float through the air.
Master Narrator ‘and thus the world was saved by the xanatos gambits of various parties… half of which don’t even appear in the story and a new era of world peace was ushered forth under the rule of Barbie.’

Master Narrator ‘To bad it only lasted a whole 22 days, during which Barbie had her first period. It was at this time she declared war against heaven and hell for making her go through such a horrible ordeal… but that’s a tale for another time.
End full page – omake shot of Bob, Tim and the rest of the cast, in the throne room in various states of tfing random NPC’s (camera man, etc…), making out, like a photo gone out of control, Standard ‘the end’ in the bottom right’
Last edited by ZeroForever on Thu Jan 20, 2011 12:19 pm, edited 8 times in total.
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby Rodney » Tue Sep 21, 2010 2:25 pm

I find your ideas very interesting and creative.

I can't wait to see in drawings the idea of a "cow cup bra" as well as the whole set-up for Hero 8.

Thank you for sharing !
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby Harri-chan » Tue Sep 21, 2010 3:35 pm

That is some really well drawn stuff. I like your ideas too, and can't wait to see more of them get done.
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby Blaze » Wed Sep 22, 2010 1:19 am

Oh, so you commissioned these Zero?

The idea is really good! Can't wait to see more.
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby Helel » Wed Sep 22, 2010 5:51 pm

Yay for Overlord Bob! I've been having a laugh with the comics that've been completed so far, ZF. :D
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby ZeroForever » Wed Sep 22, 2010 6:03 pm

another one done, this one by Black shirt boy.
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby ZeroForever » Fri Nov 05, 2010 11:14 pm

hmm skipping 7 car as there having RL issues, thus commissions went on haitus

rest are done and are already linked from my deviant journal

wrote up a christmas one post conclusion

Christmas Special
Magic knights – 5 knights in armors are all standard European armor designs which are uniform in design. Each knight is like a different stereotypical, typical Caucasian guy with red armor, large Black guy as blue, blond haired blue eyed female girl as pink, one pudgy curly black haired guy as green, and one Asian guy as yellow (like sentai/power rangers).
Sequence to Magical Pony Girls

Scene 1 – [Narrator] 'Twas the night before Christmas, when all through the house. A crash could be heard that would shake even the house.
Tammy and Barbie are sitting at a Christmas tree, when they hear a crash. Before they know it something crashes down through the chimney.
Scene 2-3 –
[Narrator] The stockings that hung by the chimney with care; with hopes that St. Nicholas would care were destroyed by a spoof; With a poof of the air and stances so strange, a truth would known, that would make someone ashamed.
from the soot cloud that results the knights emerge landing in a sentai group pose.
“HAHA I told you this was the right castle” green exclaims
“No you didn't, You just crashed into the tallest building around." blue exclaims
“Thanks to facebook we’ve finally found out who murdered Santa all those years ago, relegating us to 2nd rate holiday options!” Yellow says
“More importantly we’ve also come in vengeance for causing us to lose our jobs; with world peace no one needs us anymore!!” Red says.
"Either way for love and justice, we’ve acquired these mystical wands of power to defeat you!” pink says
Tammy says "Hmm… those wands remind me of something, but I didn’t kill Santa..." she says looking towards Barbie, “Hey it’s not my fault he had a heart attack after eating my Omni-giga-mega-super chocolate chip cookies when I was a kid.” Barbie replies. “Admittedly posting my childhood pictures on Facebook may have not been a good move though.” Panel with Facebook update status ‘new photo added’ kid overlord Bob standing on Santa’s half shown corpse
Scene 4 – [Narrator] Like a flash they moved shouting with all there might, despite it being so late at night. But wrong they were at the words to say, a different mode she showed them in a fabulous way.
head shot of the knights shouting in tandem “Sentai Force Ascension!!” only for nothing to happen. Tammy commenting “I remember those wands!! I think I changed it to Hentai Horse Henshin.” “Wait what!?” the sentai/knights say before the magic activates anyways.
Scenes 5-10 – magical girl transformation sequences for each of them, all of them transforming into well developed anthro magical pony girls. There outfits a parody of standard magical girl cloths/fuku while retaining some of the latex bondage design of a pony girl suit, with the big gag and the restraints. All ending up as female humanoids anthro mares, but still more human then equine, their arms and legs equine with hooves, fur up across their legs/arms where it’s not covered by their clothes, tails, horse ears, hair in the pony tails, etc…
Slight differences in final form depending on type of mystical animal –
[Narrator] ‘Now, Flash! now, Dance! Now, Prance like Vixens! Cum, Like it! Be Stupid! Be, blonder and ditzen! Tammy would shout; as they were all transformed with nary a doubt. Save us they thought but could not say; as things were clearly not going their way.’
“I can feel the power flowing into me!! It’s it’s it’s giving me boobs? NOOOO” blue shouts as he changes into Kelpie (Celtic water horse, has horse with fins/scales) magical horse girl
“I told you we should have done a test run but noooo yellows opinion is crap!” yellow rants as he changes into a unicorn (horned horse) magical horse girl
"BLUEEE!!! YELLOWWW!!!! wait... crap I'm next aren't I." Red yells as he changes into Rudolph like (red nosed Christmas reindeer) magical girl
“Ha-ha!! I won’t be defeated this easily, I’m use to girls clothing!!!” Green say proudly into Pegasus (winged horse) magical horse girl
“Green that’s not something to be proud of... ” pink says as she transforms into a nightmare (shadow/fire based horse; the hair/manes are like flaming shadows.) magical horse girl

Scene 11– [Narrator] They were dressed all in fur, from their heads to their hoofs, their clothes were all tarnished with yaoi and fluff; Their manes – how they sparkled, boobs oh so merry! Ass cheeks firm, with legs of a furry! Their perk lips were all shaped in an O and an ephemeral beauty that made them all glow.
Fully transformed magical pony girls now in a magical girl group pose, “Yeah... about those wands, I cursed them after I dealt with the last group of Rangers.” Tammy says
Scene 12 – [Narrator] With a wink of her eyes and a pet of their heads, Soon gave them to know they had nothing to dread.
Tammy turns towards Barbie “Anyways what did you want to do with… never mind. “ Barbie having already petting the pony girls instantly taming them. In blue RPG text box [Tamed] status above the horse girls. “Don’t worry I have just the plan to make things right!” she says as pets them.
Scene 13 – [Narrator] Thus the holidays were saved despite the big fright; As Barbie’s vassals worked all through the night. She spoke not a word as they went straight to work; filling the chests so high that it soon reached the sky. So she sprang to her sleigh, her team bonded tight; And off they flew pulled by there might. As they disappeared into the night; everyone could hear her shout in delight.”
"Merry Christmas to all, and to all a good-night!" Barbie shouting tossing out 'gifts' that look a lot likes the items from the various other commissions and other random tf/tg junk like ray guns, etc... Barbie is being pulled on sleigh by the magical pony girls, dressed in a Santa girl outfit, Tammy in elf outfit, chests of items in back.
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby Rodney » Sun Nov 21, 2010 2:58 pm

Kind Sir,

I wish to clap with both hands at the wonderful universe you created and the life you breathed in it with your talent and your gold coins.
Dear Sir, consider yourself applauded.
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby ZeroForever » Tue Nov 30, 2010 12:16 am

few more concepts, have some others commissioned but i'll post those as i get to them. Pip already finished one.
http://sinsvenials.deviantart.com/#/d33cgfi
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http://sinsvenials.deviantart.com/#/d33cgjh
http://sinsvenials.deviantart.com/#/d33cgkx
http://sinsvenials.deviantart.com/#/d33cgmh

Vacation 2 –
Phantom Thief Ray - A Short black hair bishi, Caucasian average height 20’s dressed in a traditional dress suit with a phantom of the opera type mask and cap.
Bunny girl from Wizard from Bob series – I’ll refer to her as Usa
Sequence to unknown.

Scene 1 – Usa arrives at an arcane tower holding the thief’s calling card, the tower door is still closed but above the door is a name plate ‘Wizards (cross out replaced with Magicians Tower’ “Can’t believe I have to spend my vacation doing this. Phantom thief Ray you’re going to regret sending me a calling card!” She says fist righteously shaking.
Scene 2 – Night time, the moon is out what looks like a Barbie is sneaking through the tower arriving at a cabinet which moves to reveal a hidden safe titled ‘Zane’s porn stash’ he skillfully pops it open, opening the safe causes a magic flare which dissolves the disguise revealing Ray.
Scene 3 – Spot lights turns on showing Usa in wait “I’m surprised you knew where it was, however leaving my show isn’t that easy.” Usa says. “You make it sound like you have me trapped.” Ray retorts grabbing the object in the safe which promptly zaps him. “Did I forget to mention I cursed it?” Usa says smugly “You can’t leave the tower even if you tried”.
Scene 4-7 – Various escape attempts get countered. Ex - he jumps out the window, only land back inside through the other side window.
‘Guess I’ll have to knock her out if’ Ray thinks as he attempts to knock out Usa only for her to transform his clothing into a straight jacket.
‘Dammit guess I’ll have to resort to that’ He thinks as he attempts charm Usa using Bishi sparkles, only to hit himself with it as Usa blocks with a hand size mirror, the hypo swirl eyes effect as a result. “Naughty Naughty I’m not falling for that again.” Usa says “Now what to do with you. I need a assistant but what type… I know let’s ask the audience members 4th wall notwithstanding.”
Actually create a poll
1. card trick
2. cut box trick
3. bunny hat trick
4. water escape trick
5. other?
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby ZeroForever » Fri Dec 24, 2010 11:43 am

warning has boobs, other then that not really adult per say
http://overlordbobsuniverse.blogspot.co ... ecial.html
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby Miku-chan » Fri Dec 24, 2010 12:10 pm

OMMC...(oh my Merry Christmas)... I couldn't stop laughing. No christmas coal for you...;)
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Re: Stuff I've commissioned.

Postby ZeroForever » Sat Jan 15, 2011 1:06 pm

http://overlordbobsuniverse.blogspot.com/

New commission up, vote on the poll people.
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Re: Overlord Bob commissions.

Postby ZeroForever » Sun Feb 27, 2011 6:03 pm

cause i can I'll throw a contest out there as well, variable prize rate depending on number of entries

details below
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Re: Overlord Bob commissions.

Postby ZeroForever » Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:26 pm

uncountable continuous posts, bunch of new things.
group
http://overlordbob.deviantart.com/
contest entries are rolling in already
more stuff on blog and junk.
As i don't update here often as it's fairly dead but still I'll keep this thread near the top just as a FYI.
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Re: Overlord Bob commissions.

Postby ZeroForever » Mon Aug 01, 2011 4:03 pm

doing some mini-contests in-case any of you are interested, the mini contests are more writing based this time around.

like i said previous i'll be doing all the updates on the blog, made a split blog for the adult based commissions as well.
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