Anime Con-Fusion, Matt's terrible writing

[Matt & Lure]

Well, I never really posted this here. I don't know why. But I guess I looked back at it and thought "I never really got any feedback..." So here it is, Anime Con-Fusion. A wannabe script putting Metal Sonic and other characters into anime convention situations.

Anime Con-Fusion

[Queen Octavia]

While it wasn't terrible writing, it does lead me to conclude that attending conventions rots your brain.

There were funny parts, but the script format was holding it back from being truly funny.

I think there were too many characters introduced too fast. Most of them were like "Here I am, here's my one liner, and away I go with no impact on the plot!".

In any event, it made me laugh.

[Matt & Lure]

Laughter's all I go for. The one liners thing is mainly due to the fact that it was written as a 4 panel comic script.

[Queen Octavia]

I surmised as much, however I recommend you go capture yourself a good artist before doing any more script writing.

Luring them in with shiny tablets works well, or simply a nice piece of blank canvas.

From there you just need to break their creative spirit to make them draw only what you want. A good way to do this is to attach an electric device to them, and whenever they draw a female character with an inadequate bust, electrocute them. When they draw something busty, reward them. They will soon draw only busty women, and their souls will gradually degrade until they comply to anything you require them to do.