by Mistress Guendolen » Fri Jun 13, 2008 8:23 pm
Okay, I like your shading, and you have a good sense of pose. But again, you need to work on your proportioning. The torso was too long for the breadth of shoulder, and the arm that was down also appears overly stretched, and the head is somewhat too small. The feet should be bigger too, on a male. I know proportions are a tricky bugger. Just keep practicing, and don't be afraid to reference models and art books. That's really helped me improve my art. You get better by doing, so make sure to continue doing so!
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