"What happens after dark."

[AshK]

Oh man that completely sucks! I like the story. I was hoping you would be able to finish it sometime. Oh well. Good luck in your Endeavors!

[Lanzerus]

I might take some time to rewrite this story, but for now...its sort of...dark, so if you see another thread, titled 'WHAD rewrite' then you will know what to look for.

[AshK]

Okay will do! I hope to see it soon. As I said good luck with your Endeavors.

[Mephisto]

I actually want you to finish this story it was one of the things that got me to sign up with this site.

[Lanzerus]

Well sorry, I don't have any intentions of finishing this one, one of the main characters (alex/alexandria) moved and I can't speak with him to have his dialogue as story fodder.

yes, I am that cruel of a writer to take everything my friends say and twist them out of context until they make sense in my twisted stories.

[AshK]

Oh man too bad! I really liked that story. So that's the reason why you discontinued it. That's very understandable.

[Lanzerus]

yup know you know why...that's why I am going to rewrite the entire story, new characters, new set-up and maybe a new twist.

[AshK]

Okay, that's cool! I look foward to it!

[Mephisto]

Wewt! yes! thank you! I notice you are extremely Hyper-Critical of your own work, viewing it as if it were trash and not something awesome. I personally have NO writing skills.

[Lanzerus]

ahahahahha!!! by channeling my isomniac energy, i managed to create this wonderful (horrible) little site that has this original pieve and the first chapter for WHAD rewrite.

http://www.freewebs.com/keatondar

[AshK]

Rewrite for WHAD seems to be working well so far. Except you need to replace the capital "K" with a lower case "k" or it doesn't work right. Great start, to what looks to be an excellent rewrite!

[Lanzerus]

Alright, just alert me of future issues or mistypes.

[Knight Errant]

I just finished readig what you posted here so far...

And I think it was rather good! You seemed to finally get things rolling before you... gave up. >.<

Dont lose hope!

[Lanzerus]

Yes, I had to drop it though, several things all compounded on top of each other kind of makes writing a story hard:

first and major issue: Character Alex/Alexandria, The person I was using as a model moved away to a different town, Only way to talk with him is Via chat, and still then I am lackiong the school based environment.

Issue Two: Time, I was trying to base this story over my Freshman year in High school, Unfortunately, before I could get to the good parts...*sweatdrop* summer was half way over and I forgot the major details of my freshman year...

Issue three: My habits, I tend to work at a pace I like, and if things go too fast, or too slow, I ignore it until it gets to the speed I like, and unfortuntately, I burnt out on the first story, Posting up chapters every night then going down to once a week, then just sort of...dropping it

issue Four: Work/School, Kinda hard to write a TG oriented story in a school environment without getting decently odd looks, and for me, where I live, anything considered 'abnormal' is frowned upon, WELCOME TO THE BIBLE BELT. Also, Work takes up alot of my weekend time now, I am saving up a decent ($400) amount of cash for an anime convention coming up next year in colorado, Familiar with N.D.K.?

[AshK]

Alright, just alert me of future issues or mistypes.

Okay will do Taylor. Anyway great work on WHAD Rewrite so far.