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Aperture Science R&D Sector

Postby Josh-May » Mon Feb 11, 2008 11:34 pm

http://sabre-night.deviantart.com/art/A ... r-77161141

more to come!, but tell me what you think about this one, how well was the sequence done in your opinion? what would you suggest i fix and change or do differently in my nest sequence.
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Re: Aperture Science R&D Sector

Postby Anamnesis » Tue Feb 12, 2008 2:25 am

*claps*
Cool :D Keep them coming ^^
The final one, when he's a girl, looks a bit odd...the facial expression looks more happy then shocked, and doesn't match the text, but that's the only thing wrong...To me, at least >_>
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Re: Aperture Science R&D Sector

Postby Josh-May » Tue Feb 12, 2008 10:23 am

yeah i know >_< i couldn't think up a better expression for the way he was posing, but thanks for the nice cmments! ^_^
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Re: Aperture Science R&D Sector

Postby Josh-May » Tue Feb 12, 2008 1:46 pm

http://sabre-night.deviantart.com/art/TG-goop-77198723

the TG goo!
yes i used DPRagen's idea (search that name on deviant art to find his comic of this)
i wanted to do one so yeah! here it is! excuse the crappyness... i'll try to make a better version soon!
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