Advanced Chemistry

[UDDCommander]

MarioDS01: I honestly can't say what I will do for the next chapter, if I think too much ahead I get caught in a loop and the story dies before I get to the good stuff.

Comment, predict, discuss all you want, just no suggestions or requests, please, they throw me off.

[MarioDS01]

MarioDS01: I honestly can't say what I will do for the next chapter, if I think too much ahead I get caught in a loop and the story dies before I get to the good stuff.

Comment, predict, discuss all you want, just no suggestions or requests, please, they throw me off.

Uh........OK........ I was not trying to throw you off UDDCommander... I was not try to make you upset or anything. But you should not need to sheild yourself other's suggustions or anything from readers. Behinds, I take this kind of things much more lightly as a fanfiction writer.

So please, don't take this the hard way. I was only giving an idea or 2 for the story. You don't have to use them. But I find a tiny bit offensive NOT excepting help for a story from you follow user friends or anything...

[UDDCommander]

You decide! Am I on a roll, or is it really a bun? Aka new chapter.

Chapter Four
Mall Daze

We pulled into a parking space far away from the entrance, in fact there were no other cars for 10 spots.
“Why are we all the way out here?â€

[muffinstud]

Priceless. Throwing conventional "Hey, I'm a girl all of a sudden, so I like boys" on its head is always worth it. Also, a suggestion for a title. Advanced Chemistry. I've been thinking a while, and that's the best I can think of.

[UDDCommander]

Congrats to muffinstud, you gave me the best name I've heard.

[UDDCommander]

Alright chapter 5, hope you enjoy.

Chapter Five
Partying Till the Dew’s Gone

We left the mall, and went to Autumn’s house real quick to pick up our character sheets and for me to change into my new clothes. As I entered the bathroom to change I had my first good, private look at my new body. I was small, no doubt, but what bothered me the most was that Autumn was right, I was better figured then my sisters, and perhaps the majority of 13-year-olds. And although I was very short relatively, I was still taller then them by an inch. My hair was longer and now naturally blue, but the color had darkened over time to be a darker blue, ironically the exact shade of blue I was thinking of dyeing my hair anyway. My eyes had also changed from the gray to purple, and all the hair was gone from my legs, arms, and chest. I also noticed that my ears where slightly pointed. As I pulled down the panties I was wearing to put my new pair on Autumn came in.
“Hi, I just wanted to…ah…â€

[Rowan]

Mad Science Gone Wrong and gaming references? Awesome.

They'd better not be playing 3.x though...

[UDDCommander]

Just in case this isn't obvious, this is the POV of Alex's D&D character.

Chapter Six
Dungeons and Drow

We were escorting a few wealthy merchants across the Tain Mountain Range, it wasn’t too hard of a journey, but with their wagons the merchants were really slowing down. It didn’t hurt that every few hours a wheel would break, making this normally day trip already take 3, and we were barely halfway up the pass.
“Hold!â€

[UDDCommander]

Just in case this isn't obvious, this is the POV of Alex's D&D character.

Chapter Six
Dungeons and Drow

We were escorting a few wealthy merchants across the Tain Mountain Range, it wasn’t too hard of a journey, but with their wagons the merchants were really slowing down. It didn’t hurt that every few hours a wheel would break, making this normally day trip already take 3 days, and we were barely halfway up the pass.
“Hold!â€

[ChaosRagnak]

oooooooooook.
i like what im reading but it looks like something wrong happened since ur 6th chapter is there..........twice. O.o;

[Rowan]

It was so good we get to read it twice

[UDDCommander]

Um...yeah, had nothing to do with me clicking submit, stopping the page loading making a small correction and clicking submit again.
Nope, not at all.

Could a mod delete that at some point? ^^;;

[UDDCommander]

And now for something completely different, a man with three buttocks...ok, Monty Python aside, here's a new chapter.

Chapter Seven
Growth

The game wound down after that. Ted said that he needed to explore all the effects of such a radical change in a character. I suppose the fact that Ted had absolutely no idea what to do is comforting in the way that if he had planed this he probably would have planed it so we could keep playing. After the D&D we all hung out for awhile, those who had their DSes played Mario Kart and those who didn’t played either Gears of War or Forza 2.
“Man Alex, I thought you’d be off your skills…â€

[Rowan]

Wow! ^___^ Way to leave us hanging!

[Amy-chan]

More? *makes eyes all big* Please?