Yeah I'd been thinking about more of that stuff ever since people said they liked it. I might give all six chapter a rewrite once I finish 'em to make them more of a consistant whole. Chapter one was written while I was feelin' real gud and it all just played out well without my needing to think about it. But then I started thinking about what I was trying to get done with the story each chapter instead of just straight up tomfoolery, so the humor level dropped. I've sort of been tryin ta build up ta chapta six. To that end, imma go write chapta five now. Should be done before suppxor.
And in a bizarre twist of fate, my pandora station just chose to play a song entitled "The Following Chapter". Don't worry, folks, from what I hear it's pretty good!
Oh yeah - And who said I got the transformation over with? That just because he went through a little TG I won't change him some more? That one little insignificant gender change is enough for one character? Clearly you underestimate the depths of my depravity. The opportunities! I was going to list a whole buncha stuff, but that'd be spoilxorz. Now, you may say, how can a "whole buncha stuff" take place in my two of my ~1600 word chapters? To that I can only respond with *innocent smile*. Seriourly though, he hasn't even formed a magical girl
team yet. I clearly established that there was a whole
land of these adorable talking fukues.
Chapter five was too weak to stand on its own, and is being absorbed into chapter six. I could drag out the fight more or something, but I like it better as one longer chapter. Still werkin on it. Mainly I just didn't have the same sort of ending to go from ch5-6 as I did with the others (Some sort of attempt at a cliffhanger).
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. And the best part is that he was your favorite character 
