Thnx for more feedback. Ch3 will be intense. I need to stretch and listen to some metallica before writing it ;p. When writing fight scenes I tend to throw myself around like the characters are and try to do a one man play to get in the feel of it and see what each will do. One time I seriously hurt myself lol.
I hope ya liked the description of the villain, I tried to do a good job on it. Thought I might've gone a bit overboard, but wanted him to be scary. Anyways imma give ch2 a spellcheck and prolly write ch3 tonight - unless I'm out celebrating THE LAST DAY OF CLASSES, WOOT!
...except exams, of course. Darn exams.
Oh and on a side note, encouragement is very good, and keeps me writing...
...However it does not help me improve! If I use words twice in the same paragraph of if you think my lexicon is too small or large I'd like to hear it. In short, I command you to RIP ME TO SHREDS!!! Here look, I'll start, *bites arm*, YOWCH!
{I went out to celebrate. Ch3 sometime tomorrow. Unless of course, you want to see exactly how strange my writing gets when I'm inebriated
. If so, then mayhap some other time, because for now I've crashed and burned, *collapses onto bed after hitting submit*}