Magical Sailor Fuku

I never tried captions so I thought it'd be fun,and I haven't done much with Html due to moving stuff around, so I am not sure how to make it more "browsable"
needless to say these are my first captions so go easy I guess...

http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/2046 ... ngekm5.jpg
ouch...to be continued?

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/2374 ... oolik2.jpg
never want to say what those words imply...

They're pretty decent, I must say. The only thing that could pose as a problem would be the size of the text used.

thanks, and should I remake them with bigger text then?

I'll take that as a "edit the text size"
so I'll edit them...

For the your first forays into the captioning pool, I'd say you're doing just fine. Just have fun with it and let the captioning juices flow naturally.

Mmmmm, captioning juice...

thanks, the sizes are fixed...

VEry nice for a first set. But to me, what it really comes down to is an overall rating. I liked your first set very much so and I can not wait to see your next set. =^-^=

I donno if my next sets will be as good, but I'll try, I guess if possible I'll continue the captions in a story like fashion, it'll be kinda hard though...
Edit: I forgot to say thanks to MarioDS01 for supplying the art for caption 2, so thanks MarioDS01

here are four more, but I am not certain of how good they are as they are a continuation of the one with Haseo.
and sorry about the double post...

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8892 ... tepng2.jpg

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8294/despairev6.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/6973/resolveva3.jpg

http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/7486 ... ackmg7.jpg
this has a subtitle and I don't know how to take those off without seriously damaging the image, sorry
it was kinda hard to find the material, so I apologize if they aren't that good...

Nice little story you hade there. I rather enjoyed it. =^-^=