Captions from the Eternal Eye

[MarioDS01]

I gotta side with Mitchell on this one. For a first fresh batch out of the oven, they were good. But now you need to add more to the recipe, and pull out the full flavor of your pic. Ok, i just made myself hungry. Going to get some tuna. Keep up the good captions. =^-^=

Agree with you Katty. They are good fresh out of the oven, but they need more in the recipe for the caption like story and detail of what happened to the victims and how they are mentally if they are themselves.

[Stellar]

Mario, enough quadruple posting. if you scroll down while you're on the page to type your reply you can see previous posts and copy peoples text from there.

[MarioDS01]

Good ideas, but I'd like to see them fleshed out more. Especially the virus one. That has potential for interesting little mini-stories, and I'd like to see you play with them more. Make them fuller, as it were. You can do it, and od it well, I'm sure.

Yeah, I agree with you guendolen. The Magical TG virus series would be more interest if they came out more like Mini-Stories then a one sentence statement of a guy has been turned into a girl and then there is a little joke, that could have been even better with a full story.

But don't worry, I have given a suggestion to the TG captioner for the next TG Magical virus TG caption like there could be a good ending/outcome from the virus, especially if the victim has a really good best friend who helps the victim and falls in love with his best friend. Just a little idea that would go well with a solid story I think!

[MarioDS01]

Mario, enough quadruple posting. if you scroll down while you're on the page to type your reply you can see previous posts and copy peoples text from there.

Sorry Stellar. Did not mean to annoy you or anything of my multiply posts. But wanted to reply to certain messages. I will try to take your suggestion next time when a next topic shows up with new captions.

For now, I will be making at least one more post after this one and then try your method so I don't annoy you anymore...

[MarioDS01]

cool but only one small tiny problem.there's not alot of text letting the fun die quickly

Yeah, I agree, it does kill the fun pretty quickly without a good story to each caption a little.

[Kether]

I definately think it would have been a stronger series had there been abit more description for the Virus.. epsecially why those pictures

[P-tan]

I didn't post that!! grr.. Kemia did this I bet.

[Nikki]

Well I was gonna make a new topic but since someone bumped this.

A short Shoujoland Caption

A Digital Age Caption

Start of a new series

Link sure is dense

Lastly a Yu-Gi-Oh based Caption

[Katty]

The first one was cool
The second one was also good, but it hurt my eyes. I am a near-sighted catgirl after all
The thrid one you could have done a bit more with, but it was still good.
In the forth one, how could (s)he not notice?
The art in the last one was kinda odd.

And that is how I feel about this set. Hope it was not rude or anything. =^-^=

[Nikki]

The last one was something I found on Deviantart.

[Katty]

Ah. That says a bit. I know the stuff on deviant art. Still though, your captions are good. =^-^=

[Nikki]

Part 1 of 2 part series

Part 2

Why Prank Calling is a bad idea.

[Katty]

Wow. You're still alive? I thought I left you in a hole 6 feet under, um, I mean, welcome back? ^-^;

Anyway, I liked the 2 parter one, but It would have been nice if the boy became a bunny as well, not just a girl. As for the second one, well, it was a little fast. You could have made a good story out of it. But all in all, I liked your captions. Nice to see ya again.

=^-^=

[Lucky]

Thows are great. XD Not sure if you were going for it, but they had a cute quialty to them.

[jimmyinwhite]

great batch of captions. I wonder if that payback for the prank would work on telemarketers?