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				KELBYS FIRST CAPTIONS yay!! <3
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:23 am 
				by kelbywhatley
				YAY ITS FINALLY DONE THE SECOND ONE IS HERE!
ya my first caption i hope you guys like it! and dont worry i have more on the way soon!recently i posted my first caption and then started rough drafts for a new one and have come up with this so i hope you like it as well.
the fallen angles
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d96/k ... angles.jpg
nurse leena. ( newest )
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d96/k ... onmark.jpg 
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:55 am 
				by Nikki
				The picture kind of looks like Angel Sakura effected by some kind of slut card but it's a good caption
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 10:44 am 
				by jimmyinwhite
				Angelic. Simply Angelic.
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 11:14 am 
				by Kumi-chan
				Nice work on that.
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 3:46 pm 
				by Guest
				MaidenofDarkness wrote:The picture kind of looks like Angel Sakura effected by some kind of slut card but it's a good caption
 hey lol im not some slut sakura angle! >< lol.
 
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 3:58 pm 
				by kelbywhatley
				Anonymous wrote:MaidenofDarkness wrote:The picture kind of looks like Angel Sakura effected by some kind of slut card but it's a good caption
 hey lol im not some slut sakura angle! >< lol.
 
oops wasnt on my acount and im almost finished with the second yay! ><
 
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 4:32 pm 
				by Nikki
				I didn't say you were just looked like it. And if you like Rping Check out my Chez Shoujoland rp
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 5:08 pm 
				by Chibi MitchellTF
				Um...maybe a bit of grammar check...
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 5:10 pm 
				by kelbywhatley
				MitchellTF wrote:Um...maybe a bit of grammar check...
im not literate but will cheack wenever i can ok.
 
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 5:12 pm 
				by DarkMonk
				Great job
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 5:15 pm 
				by kelbywhatley
				DarkMonk wrote:Great job
thnks and im almost ready for a second if i have my rough draft down right and i get that one more literate.
 
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:20 pm 
				by Mistress Guendolen
				Nice work, especially for a first try.  Just please try to capitalize, okay?  Not that it hurts the content, but it can be a little distracting and thus draw attention away from your actual work.  And we all know no one wants that.
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:47 pm 
				by kelbywhatley
				Guendolen wrote:Nice work, especially for a first try.  Just please try to capitalize, okay?  Not that it hurts the content, but it can be a little distracting and thus draw attention away from your actual work.  And we all know no one wants that.
what from the drawing or the words? im confused lol.
 
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:58 pm 
				by Katty
				I liked the caption. keep up the good work.
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jan 26, 2006 10:00 pm 
				by kelbywhatley
				Katty wrote:I liked the caption. keep up the good work.
if you like cat girls then i have one just for you. lol its my second one.