KELBYS FIRST CAPTIONS yay!! <3

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KELBYS FIRST CAPTIONS yay!! <3

Postby kelbywhatley » Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:23 am

YAY ITS FINALLY DONE THE SECOND ONE IS HERE!
ya my first caption i hope you guys like it! and dont worry i have more on the way soon!recently i posted my first caption and then started rough drafts for a new one and have come up with this so i hope you like it as well.

the fallen angles
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d96/k ... angles.jpg

nurse leena. ( newest )
http://i33.photobucket.com/albums/d96/k ... onmark.jpg
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Postby Nikki » Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:55 am

The picture kind of looks like Angel Sakura effected by some kind of slut card but it's a good caption
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Postby jimmyinwhite » Thu Jan 26, 2006 10:44 am

Angelic. Simply Angelic.
i walk in the land of dreams looking for the truth
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Postby Kumi-chan » Thu Jan 26, 2006 11:14 am

Nice work on that.
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Postby Guest » Thu Jan 26, 2006 3:46 pm

MaidenofDarkness wrote:The picture kind of looks like Angel Sakura effected by some kind of slut card but it's a good caption
hey lol im not some slut sakura angle! >< lol.
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Postby kelbywhatley » Thu Jan 26, 2006 3:58 pm

Anonymous wrote:
MaidenofDarkness wrote:The picture kind of looks like Angel Sakura effected by some kind of slut card but it's a good caption
hey lol im not some slut sakura angle! >< lol.
oops wasnt on my acount and im almost finished with the second yay! ><
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Postby Nikki » Thu Jan 26, 2006 4:32 pm

I didn't say you were just looked like it. And if you like Rping Check out my Chez Shoujoland rp
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Postby Chibi MitchellTF » Thu Jan 26, 2006 5:08 pm

Um...maybe a bit of grammar check...
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Postby kelbywhatley » Thu Jan 26, 2006 5:10 pm

MitchellTF wrote:Um...maybe a bit of grammar check...
im not literate but will cheack wenever i can ok.
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Postby DarkMonk » Thu Jan 26, 2006 5:12 pm

Great job
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Postby kelbywhatley » Thu Jan 26, 2006 5:15 pm

DarkMonk wrote:Great job
thnks and im almost ready for a second if i have my rough draft down right and i get that one more literate.
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Postby Mistress Guendolen » Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:20 pm

Nice work, especially for a first try. Just please try to capitalize, okay? Not that it hurts the content, but it can be a little distracting and thus draw attention away from your actual work. And we all know no one wants that.
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Postby kelbywhatley » Thu Jan 26, 2006 7:47 pm

Guendolen wrote:Nice work, especially for a first try. Just please try to capitalize, okay? Not that it hurts the content, but it can be a little distracting and thus draw attention away from your actual work. And we all know no one wants that.
what from the drawing or the words? im confused lol.
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Postby Katty » Thu Jan 26, 2006 9:58 pm

I liked the caption. keep up the good work.
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Postby kelbywhatley » Thu Jan 26, 2006 10:00 pm

Katty wrote:I liked the caption. keep up the good work.
if you like cat girls then i have one just for you. lol its my second one.
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