Magical Sailor Fuku

by **Mitera Nikkou** » Thu Nov 17, 2005 7:03 pm

Ah, these were good. I especially liked the one with the rock star. Also, your punctuation has improved, for the most part (some of the captions were lacking). However, this time there were , at least, two captions where a word or two was missing: I think they were "Potions" ("I thought (for) sure that this one would change me back"), and "cursedsword" ("(said) the newly transformed swordsman"). Also, in that last one, the "cursedsword", "should of" should be "should have" or "should've." I hope that helps. But you are improving.

by **Mistress Guendolen** » Thu Nov 17, 2005 8:10 pm

Nice work, overall. I especially liked the pirates one, because the storylet wasn't all about cute peaches and cream. Unique, that. Though the "pair" of the last two worked well together, too. I was also amused by the fact that the rocker girl had glasses, as I have them myself and don't see them often in anime art.

by **Kumi-chan** » Fri Nov 18, 2005 11:58 am

Pretty good. *nods* Nice work.

by **Yamigalence** » Mon Nov 21, 2005 1:54 pm

Here is yet another batch of my captions:

http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y251/Y ... apixie.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y251/Y ... ngpool.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y251/Y ... change.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y251/Y ... /AWish.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y251/Y ... awitch.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y251/Y ... cecafe.jpg
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y251/Y ... eyball.jpg

by **Mistress Guendolen** » Mon Nov 21, 2005 2:45 pm

Well now, you're getting really prolific with this! I like the pixie one the best.

Though the moral at the end of the witch one was a neat twist, too.

by **Kumi-chan** » Mon Nov 21, 2005 3:40 pm

those are pretty good. Nice work

by **Funny Hat + Funny Accent** » Mon Nov 21, 2005 5:34 pm

Very nicely done. Please keep up the good work!

by **Mitera Nikkou** » Mon Nov 21, 2005 7:18 pm

Yeah, I liked the pixie one too... And I'll admit that it's because of a little bias. ;p Of course, the lot of these are good, and showing that you're getting better as far as grammar and stuff goes.

by **Beyond** » Mon Nov 21, 2005 8:43 pm

*thumbs up* They are good although there are some comonly used cliches there.

by **Yamigalence** » Wed Nov 30, 2005 9:28 am

Sorry I haven't posted any new captions for a while. The firewall my computer is using blocks photobucket now for some stupid reason. Does anyone now a way I could get around this?

by **Chibi Carnifex_Omega** » Wed Dec 07, 2005 2:38 pm

No idea how to get round firewalls short of disabling them or editing the settings and adding photobucket as a trusted site.

@Bunch before last post- very nice. The guy who messed with the witch got off lightly. She coulda tweaked his mind as well....

by **ChaosWolf** » Mon Jan 09, 2006 8:47 pm

Excellent work.

by **Yamigalence** » Thu Jan 12, 2006 3:22 pm

Within the next couple of days I plan to have a few more captions up....

Sorry to keep you all waiting for more new caps.

by **Yamigalence** » Sat Feb 04, 2006 10:13 am

by **Siegfried** » Sat Feb 04, 2006 10:29 am

Excellent.

Magical Sailor Fuku

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