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Rain Dance's Captions

PostPosted: Sat Sep 17, 2005 10:53 pm
by Rain Dance
Well, after a year-and-a-half of lurking and reading other people's work, I finally decided to post some my own captions. I suspect they will be somewhat different from the norm on this forum, given my attempts to keep them as quick and concise as possible, though at times I do get a bit tangential(It Says So in the Handbook, for instance).

Without further adieu, the first ten captions off of my intellectual assembly line:

The Perils of Confrontation -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc1.jpg
Me and My Big Mouth -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc2.jpg
Buyer's Remorse -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc3.jpg
Don't Panaic(Just Yet) -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc5.jpg
Specificity Helps -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc6.jpg
Of Idioms and Fanartists -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc7.jpg
The First Spin of the Wheel of Morality -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc8.jpg
It Say So in the Handbook -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... /msfc9.jpg
Don't Cut the Red Wire! Or Any of Them, For That Matter -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc10.jpg
A Second Spin of the Wheel of Morality -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc11.jpg

I'm constantly looking for feedback, opinions, and constructive criticism to help me improve my writing. So, let me have it should you have any of those. Or if you spot spelling mistakes. Lemme know about them too.

[Edit: It also occurs to me that I probably made a very bad word choice in the title, as I suspect ye old regulars shall break out the TG Ray Guns and assorted other gimmicks to convert me to the Sisterhood.]

PostPosted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 12:28 am
by Kumi-chan
Better nice ones. They are pretty good.

PostPosted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 6:55 am
by Josie
Very nice captions. XD The Wheel of Morality, very funny

PostPosted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 12:42 pm
by Mitera Nikkou
Yes; short, sweet, and good. No spelling errors that I can remember spotting... The only thing I find only a tad bit off, is just a technicality: it's a little straining to see the dark blue words on blue with it blotchy (or whatever the technical name for it is). But I'm assuming that you're using some kind of paint program? Otherwise everything seems fine, and your content good. ^_^

PostPosted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 5:45 pm
by Meru
Pretty awesome captions, compared to some that have been on here.

PostPosted: Sun Sep 18, 2005 9:33 pm
by Sasha
not bad and nice animanics refrance with the weel ones ^^

A Long Overdue Second Batch

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 4:40 am
by Rain Dance
Murphy's Laws of the RPC: Defense Contractors Suck -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc12.jpg
RPC Files: CYOA -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc13.jpg
RPC Files: Always Look on the Bright Side -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc14.jpg
The Wishgranter: Ingrates -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc15.jpg
RPC Files: A Moment in Time -- http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b177/ ... msfc16.jpg

Updates should start coming a bit quicker than this three-month delay. Sometimes, though, the creative juices just go south and you can't regain them to save your soul(or, in these parts, your gender).

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 11:36 am
by Sierra_Rune
Great ones... I really like them. Quite innovative.

PostPosted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 12:32 pm
by Mistress Guendolen
Good work, overall. I especially liked the narrative tone in the "don't panic" one.

PostPosted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 12:21 pm
by Chibi MitchellTF
I like 'em, I just wish they had better 'names', for easier filing...