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				Hiro K's Caption Area
				
Posted: 
Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:53 pm 
				by Hira Kanaki
				Ok now since I saw all of the captions being used I thought why not make a couple of my own though probably not as good as the other people who them, and tell me what I can do to improve them, but I've rambled long enough.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic1.jpg -Inspired by a true event on this forum.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic2.jpg -Never trust spellbooks at times.
Will have more later.
 
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Wed Jul 27, 2005 10:18 pm 
				by Sasha
				not bad for a 1st go HIro-chan
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jul 28, 2005 6:26 am 
				by Mitera Nikkou
				Mostly, the punctuation can do with a little improvement. But everything else is alright. And the captions themselves were good. ^_^
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Thu Jul 28, 2005 10:36 pm 
				by Hira Kanaki
				Three more captions for your viewing pleasure.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic4.jpg -This one has been given a nekofied touch.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic5.jpg -Would you lose or would you try to win?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic6.jpg -Again, never trust ancient books.
Thank you and please tell me what you think of them and the previous ones too.
 
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Fri Jul 29, 2005 1:48 am 
				by Duck
				The taking away the cut boxes was a definate improvement, you show a lotta skill in here. Keep it up
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Fri Jul 29, 2005 4:38 am 
				by Temet nosce
				Excellent captions...And I would probably try not to win. Especially since Id probably have a good chance of winning if I tried.
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Fri Jul 29, 2005 9:50 am 
				by Kumi-chan
				Nice work! They are all coolies!
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Fri Jul 29, 2005 6:20 pm 
				by Sierra_Rune
				Short and Nice.  Very good, especially considering that it's your first try.
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Sat Jul 30, 2005 9:22 am 
				by Mitera Nikkou
				You're doing a good job there, Hiro. Keep up the wonderful work. ^_^
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Mon Aug 01, 2005 2:16 pm 
				by Hira Kanaki
				Three more captions for your viewing pleasure.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic7.jpg -Transplanted Brain Into Cyborg Style Story.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic8.jpg -Candy Ad Story.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic9.jpg -Confusing Body Switch Story.
Enjoy and tell me what you think of them.
 
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Mon Aug 01, 2005 2:22 pm 
				by Temet nosce
				Very nice. I particularly like the robot angel one.
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Mon Aug 01, 2005 5:03 pm 
				by Sasha
				good but i can't read the middle one can you please fix it
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Mon Aug 01, 2005 9:00 pm 
				by Duck
				The pics are great (i love the kitty one) but you're using the same theme in two of these... Which isn't bad, but there are a lot of options to you. Just remember that.
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Mon Aug 01, 2005 9:52 pm 
				by Kumi-chan
				Coolies!!! Those are great!!!
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:36 pm 
				by Hira Kanaki
				Another set of the three typical captions...because I was kinda bored.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... nPic12.jpg -An Evil Cat, not to be mistaken for a Tony Hawk Board.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... nPic15.jpg -Cliched Beast Trainer Story.
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... nPic16.jpg -Bonus points for those who get the references in this one.