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Postby Hira Kanaki » Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:53 pm

Ok now since I saw all of the captions being used I thought why not make a couple of my own though probably not as good as the other people who them, and tell me what I can do to improve them, but I've rambled long enough.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic1.jpg -Inspired by a true event on this forum.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic2.jpg -Never trust spellbooks at times.

Will have more later.
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Postby Sasha » Wed Jul 27, 2005 10:18 pm

not bad for a 1st go HIro-chan
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Thu Jul 28, 2005 6:26 am

Mostly, the punctuation can do with a little improvement. But everything else is alright. And the captions themselves were good. ^_^
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Postby Hira Kanaki » Thu Jul 28, 2005 10:36 pm

Three more captions for your viewing pleasure.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic4.jpg -This one has been given a nekofied touch.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic5.jpg -Would you lose or would you try to win?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic6.jpg -Again, never trust ancient books.

Thank you and please tell me what you think of them and the previous ones too.
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Postby Duck » Fri Jul 29, 2005 1:48 am

The taking away the cut boxes was a definate improvement, you show a lotta skill in here. Keep it up
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Postby Temet nosce » Fri Jul 29, 2005 4:38 am

Excellent captions...And I would probably try not to win. Especially since Id probably have a good chance of winning if I tried.
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Postby Kumi-chan » Fri Jul 29, 2005 9:50 am

Nice work! They are all coolies!
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Postby Sierra_Rune » Fri Jul 29, 2005 6:20 pm

Short and Nice. Very good, especially considering that it's your first try.
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Sat Jul 30, 2005 9:22 am

You're doing a good job there, Hiro. Keep up the wonderful work. ^_^
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Postby Hira Kanaki » Mon Aug 01, 2005 2:16 pm

Three more captions for your viewing pleasure.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic7.jpg -Transplanted Brain Into Cyborg Style Story.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic8.jpg -Candy Ad Story.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... onPic9.jpg -Confusing Body Switch Story.

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Postby Temet nosce » Mon Aug 01, 2005 2:22 pm

Very nice. I particularly like the robot angel one.
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Postby Sasha » Mon Aug 01, 2005 5:03 pm

good but i can't read the middle one can you please fix it
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Postby Duck » Mon Aug 01, 2005 9:00 pm

The pics are great (i love the kitty one) but you're using the same theme in two of these... Which isn't bad, but there are a lot of options to you. Just remember that.
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Postby Kumi-chan » Mon Aug 01, 2005 9:52 pm

Coolies!!! Those are great!!!
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Postby Hira Kanaki » Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:36 pm

Another set of the three typical captions...because I was kinda bored.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... nPic12.jpg -An Evil Cat, not to be mistaken for a Tony Hawk Board.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... nPic15.jpg -Cliched Beast Trainer Story.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v513/ ... nPic16.jpg -Bonus points for those who get the references in this one.
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