Kijo's Captions!

[Musashi]

Yeah, I remember that Aeris one. I still love it. XD *Skwee!*

[Cutey Kerina]

*giggles at the joy caused by all them* Danke for making them!

[Kyrex]

Angel TF village place... Kooky...

[Helel]

Yeah, I remember that Aeris one. I still love it. XD *Skwee!*

I'll have to remember that Musashi. ^^

Good job Kijo.

[Kijo]

Some More Captions ^_^ Hope Ya Like'em

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... /Ahiru.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... ns/Ted.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... /Thorn.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... sukasa.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... /SVARB.jpg

[BrianGirl]

Yay I got captioned!

[Cutey Kerina]

Comments directly on the ones I haven't yet

Alyta (last page) - *grins* Aw, that's really sweet. The visual look is really unique.

Skyblue - I know that image! That's a character I used to occasionally use for avatars. Interesting story...I'm still kinda split on mental transformations but the trick element is both interesting and a little saddening as well.

Amber - Now that's the kind of feeling I want captions. Why is it there isn't more general irritation about being turned female in captions for the character? Plus it's cute and pokes cute fun at bishi stereotypes. Really well done James

Kyrex - Hmm...sort of a beginning of a story sorta. Nice idea. And rather cute image.

Shino2 - Umm...ooookay. No clue what green tornado is. And I don't like the happy, giddy, subservent employee idea. Sounds too close to brainwashing slavery. Cute image, don't like some of the ideas in it.

Mana - Whoa...that's quite an image. Cute, interesting concept. ^^

Aeris - Ok....nice angel. Good Musashi-worthy stuff but I wish it'd been longer and more detailed.

Ahiru - Clever...I like the male name given to Ahiru, good use of image. I especially love the way the font works with the color scheme. And btw Ahiran...we can take care of that

Ted - Ack. It's not updating with the bigger, better front @_@. Now that's a test I'd really want to fail. Interesting concept.

Thorn - I can't offer an objective opinion on the text, I liked the way it ended up (although still no clue about this "green tornado"). This kinda forced I'm better with because at least there's some of that "-_-;;" ness that's important to me. The text and image go well and overall, I really like the image, nice hair.

Tsukasa - Oh nice ^^. Great writing despite the typos. Sounds like an ad. Very inventive.

SVARB - Cute! I love the image and a very nice little story to go with it.

[Kijo]

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... ieOdin.jpg

Disclaimer: Odin and Dexie do not have a relationship like this RL, this is just a caption made out of fun!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... Robert.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... s/Ted1.jpg (resized)

There ya go!

[Duck]

I like em, keep em up.

s'pretty much what i gotta say there.. oh and now dexie and odin can make kittens in caption.. musa would love it.

[Skyblue]

nice work on the captions, Musa will love that first one.
The second one uses an image of a female knight from ragnarok online.
Gotta love the bunny headband ^_^

[Chris Thorn]

Comments directly on the ones I haven't yet...

Thorn - ... still no clue about this "green tornado"

The green tornado was Princess Jei's signiture attack. Probably just because she loved green. (I'm not completely sure, but I think her TF tornado was pink). When X became her replacement, of sorts, Xia also got the tornado.

[Cutey Kerina]

nice work on the captions, Musa will love that first one.

O.O

She's not the only one....whoa Dexie and Odin...

The second one is really cute too, I love the armored look ^^ Very sweet little story to go with it too.

And great on the redone one.

THANK YOU! *glomps James*

[Musashi]

W0000000000tfish! XD Myaaaa, shounen-ai goodness! Sankyuu, Kijoooo~ *SQUISHY*

[Kijo]

hehe sorry I haven't posted any captions in a while, I haven't felt very inspired, yanno, but I have 8 captions for all of my adoring public today, I hope you enjoy them as much as I enjoyed making them!


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... rnalae.jpg

My First attempt at an Aeternalae caption, I hope its ok, I tried to get the view right, the wording may not be right but I hope I got the point across in it.


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... s/Cook.jpg

Not really sure what to say here >.>;


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... /Demon.jpg

I tried to grasp the feeling of the girl I hope I did the stand-point well from her direction but its hard to say!


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... ons/LL.jpg

Caption that shows you that some girls have more ways at revenge than just kneeing you and calling you a pervert

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... Daniel.jpg

Of Course I had to at least have one Female to Male caption, its not very in-depth but its there, I hope you enjoy it n.n!


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... essica.jpg

This caption was actually done by Eri, but I forged it and brought it to life on hard-copy n.n


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... s/Alex.jpg

This caption is a co-production of Kijo and Eri n.n I hope you enjoy it!


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v487/ ... ns/Tim.jpg

This one I tried to get that emotional best friend type thing, but I dont know well it turned it out


id appreciate any feedback from anybody *bows* and thank you for you time, I hope you enjoyed reading them I really do!

[Ninian]

Here are ones that stuck out for me:

Aeternalae - Eh, I think you overdid this one. I mean, touching is nice but it's really sappy -- let the picture do more work. However, I will say I like the idea that Eternals more often than not are selective with who they contact -- instead of the carpet bombing sorta writing I've done. At least that's how I'd be if I were an Eternal. This is a candidate for a seperate story, or a Nikkou-style "Story with image".

Daniel - The text in the upper left hand corner makes it really obvious you "borrowed" an original art. That's not a good thing. If I were the artist and I found a caption made to it, I'd be kinda put off -- independant artists struggle enough as it is. At the very least, remove such wording on the picture so it doesn't look like you're intentionally showing disrespect.

Alex - Grand slam. It avoided the obvious plot twist and the story/caption synch up was dead on, and it did a superb job of leaving it open-ended but yet still leaving no question as to the transformee's destination. Consider writing a story about this or making a sequel caption. Better yet, you and Eri should become longterm caption partners, because this one owns.

LL - Classic TG plot (sometimes called a cliche) but executed near perfectly. I could easily imagine the evil lilt to their voice and its just beautiful. You are aware what "LL" means in some circles, right? (Lesbian lover)

Tim - I like this one a lot, even though the wording is a bit weird. However, it does kinda brush up against the peeve of some that "Female = Bliss". Keep it personal, and be very careful not to generalize or type an entire gender.