Comments directly on the ones I haven't yet
Alyta (last page) - *grins* Aw, that's really sweet. The visual look is really unique.
Skyblue - I know that image! That's a character I used to occasionally use for avatars. Interesting story...I'm still kinda split on mental transformations but the trick element is both interesting and a little saddening as well.
Amber - Now that's the kind of feeling I want captions. Why is it there isn't more general irritation about being turned female in captions for the character? Plus it's cute and pokes cute fun at bishi stereotypes. Really well done James
Kyrex - Hmm...sort of a beginning of a story sorta. Nice idea. And rather cute image.
Shino2 - Umm...ooookay. No clue what green tornado is. And I don't like the happy, giddy, subservent employee idea. Sounds too close to brainwashing slavery. Cute image, don't like some of the ideas in it.
Mana - Whoa...that's quite an image. Cute, interesting concept. ^^
Aeris - Ok....nice angel. Good Musashi-worthy stuff but I wish it'd been longer and more detailed.
Ahiru - Clever...I like the male name given to Ahiru, good use of image. I especially love the way the font works with the color scheme. And btw Ahiran...we can take care of that
Ted - Ack. It's not updating with the bigger, better front @_@. Now that's a test I'd really want to fail. Interesting concept.
Thorn - I can't offer an objective opinion on the text, I liked the way it ended up (although still no clue about this "green tornado"). This kinda forced I'm better with because at least there's some of that "-_-;;" ness that's important to me. The text and image go well and overall, I really like the image, nice hair.
Tsukasa - Oh nice ^^. Great writing despite the typos. Sounds like an ad. Very inventive.
SVARB - Cute! I love the image and a very nice little story to go with it.