muffinstud wrote:Okay, enough of me lurking at your captions. Now to tell you what I think!
I rather enjoy the visual flow of your captions. The text is colorful, easy to follow and read, and lends to the general sense of fun you usually have in the tone you set. I'm taking some notes, and you should see me stealing... er, I mean learning from you here in some of my work to come. Bravo, and keep it coming.
That said, I'd like to point out that sometimes it's difficult to tell just who's talking, especially in this latest one. It took me a couple reads to tell that all of the dialogue was coming from the girl in the picture. It would have been easier to follow if you didn't use the quotation marks.
All in all, I'm rather enjoying all this, and you (along with Feng and everyone else that's been captioning recently) have made me want to get more prolific.
Thanks a lot for the compliments. As I said to Ninian, it means a lot since you were one of the many that inspired me to start doing a few captions.
The many quotation of talking in that last caption most likely won't be happening again. That was an experiment on my behalf to make shorter captions. Still I like to have the first line to be a quote as a way to have a 'cold opening' since I don't do that within the caption. Still I consider that and try to use it a bit better.
