Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

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Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Maiden Miki » Sun Jul 03, 2011 1:46 am

Well seeing Feng making his own captions kind of made me want to try out making a few captions. Been wanting to for a while and the captions that this site had did brought me here. So without further ado....



The cafe is now open.....Miki will be your maid for today. She will be serving you your captions with a hint of anime in them. Please enjoy.


First up:

Your typical maid caption

It always about the people

I surely hope you enjoy the captions and I hope to serve more soon. I try to keep them short but I guess they all can't be. If you have any comments then please feel free to leave some. Tips are welcome. heeheehee
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Feng » Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:27 am

These are some really nice captions Megan. Good pics with an interesting story to go along with it. So what's for the second course?
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Maiden Miki » Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:21 pm

Here comes the second course sir. I hope you enjoy these. This course includes a nice serving of bunnygirls.

Some fan art can go too far

Who needs help?

Bunny girls and friends
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Marky » Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:28 pm

Like the captions so far, minus a few grammatical errors. :P
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby AlanGarouRedux » Tue Jul 05, 2011 7:20 pm

Nice to see some new life in this subforum. You've definitely got the hang of editing in the text, and besides for the previously mentioned typos and such they're pretty well written. Some variety would be nice, though.
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Maiden Miki » Wed Jul 06, 2011 12:04 am

Marky wrote:Like the captions so far, minus a few grammatical errors. :P

Grr....I mean....Oh dear! Grammatical errors. My greatest foe! I will try my best to take care of those in the future sir.

AlanGarouRedux wrote:Nice to see some new life in this subforum. You've definitely got the hang of editing in the text, and besides for the previously mentioned typos and such they're pretty well written. Some variety would be nice, though.


Some variety? As in how?

I have another serving today. These were made before the comments above so please forgive me if there are a bit of bumps. Also they were prepare very late in the night. (haha) One of them includes something different on my behalf since I don't do first person point of views. The other is a continuation of a previous caption.


Time are tough if you have to take a second job

Sometimes you have to go back to school
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Harri-chan » Wed Jul 06, 2011 7:54 am

I love the back to school one, Miki <3
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby AlanGarouRedux » Wed Jul 06, 2011 4:33 pm

Maiden Miki wrote:Some variety? As in how?

Never mind, the new captions addressed the complaint. I was just a bit confused by how many of the first two batches had the girls in bunny outfits.
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Maiden Miki » Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:52 am

Ickle Harri-chan wrote:I love the back to school one, Miki <3

Oh cool. Maybe I will do more involving the mansion and it's owner. Need to find more K-on girls.

AlanGarouRedux wrote:Never mind, the new captions addressed the complaint. I was just a bit confused by how many of the first two batches had the girls in bunny outfits.

Oh okay. Just a heads up. Maybe the next batch will be just girls in swimsuits. I was just wandering around and found some and decided to just do that. Think of it as the Swimsuit edition. haha

Hmm...how do maids laugh?
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Blaze » Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:23 am

They're all really good Miki ^__^

Keep it up!
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Feng » Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:20 pm

*Wipes his mouth with a napkin*

Delectable! You're cooking is quite impressive Misstress Miki!
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Maiden Miki » Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:58 pm

Thank yous sirs for your kind words. I am glad that you are liking my work.

I now present you with my swimsuit edition captions.

I think this person had a run in with Francesca

Teenagers and what they do while they are in love

Two girls just wanting to have fun
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby AlanGarouRedux » Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:42 am

The third one was the best of this batch, both in terms of writing and with how the words were worked into the image. The dialog was very natural, too. However, you might want to find a way to avoid the phrase "who would have guessed." Most writers have phrases that they overuse when free-writing, and I think that might be one of yours.
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby AshK » Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:17 pm

All your captions are awesome. Maybe I should try my hand at them. Maybe I will maybe I won't good work!
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Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

Postby Maiden Miki » Fri Jul 15, 2011 1:37 am

Thank you very much for the nice comments masters.

I have brought another serving of captions. Took a bit longer due to not being all well. Still I hope you enjoy these two.


That is not how you find 'x'

I should have done a Harry Potter caption
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