Miki the Maid: Serving Captions

[Maiden Miki]

Aw maaaaan not again! D:

*adds Miki to "the list."*

"Oh dear! This surely is frightening. I am just a simple maid. What wrong could I do? Ohohohoho~

Kekekeke!

*Awards Miki his seal of approval*

I am glad that you enjoy the caption.

I wanted to pipe in and say I'm enjoying your captions and have saved a couple to my personal collection.

I am glad that you been enjoying my captions. That means a lot.

Here is a new caption requested by Ninian. I have never written a caption in second person before but I hope you guys like it.

Slave for You

[Ninian]

Ooh, dominant. <3

Yeah, that's basically second-person.

1st person -- "The laser came at me... I shut my eyes and suddenly felt warm and strange all over."
2nd person -- "The laser came at you but you barely had time to react. Shutting your eyes, you could feel a warm tingling and strange all over."
3rd person -- "The laser came at Alan. He shut his eyes, and felt a tingling as cat ears began to appear and his body shrank."


My favorite captions are usually second person, or they have implications that the transformation could happen to you. I go for an immersion model. Works well with images where the viewer is being looked at directly.

BTW, "avoid this faith" -- do you mean that Jehovah's Witnesses were involved in this TF? (just kidding).

Thanks for indulging me.

[dr5]

I love your work and as a challenge for you try to do the same event in first, second and third person narratives.

[AshK]

Wow! Excellent work on your newest captions! I look forward to more awesome captions from you!

[Maiden Miki]

I love your work and as a challenge for you try to do the same event in first, second and third person narratives.

A challenge? Well I gave it a try. I admit that first person isn't my specialty but I hope that this dish is to your liking.

Slave for You (First Person)

Slave for You (Third Person)

I also got a new one.

Rose for my Love

[AshK]

Wow! Awesome work on your latest caption! I like them all! Keep up the awesome work!

[dr5]

Nicely done I think you rose to my challenge, congratulations.

[Ninian]

Thank you for the service, Miki.

*leaves a generous tip and a recommendation to the hostess*

[shinryou]

1. Didn't know you did captions
2. Loves them
3. Wants more
4. Has become a lurker >_>

[Maiden Miki]

Wow! Awesome work on your latest caption! I like them all! Keep up the awesome work!

Thanks. Just trying to get a good stockpile of them before I upload more.

Nicely done I think you rose to my challenge, congratulations.

Thanks. It was surely interesting to do. Glad that I took you up on it.

Thank you for the service, Miki.

*leaves a generous tip and a recommendation to the hostess*

Thank you for the tip. I am glad to have made my master proud. *bows*

1. Didn't know you did captions
2. Loves them
3. Wants more
4. Has become a lurker >_>

1. It been a recent thing I been trying.
2. Glad that you do.
3. More are coming. Just getting a stockpile of them.
4. You are always free to do something in the Muffinville subforum. Miki does want her Kaya.

As said before. I have some on stockpile. Just trying to balance out posting them on the blog and here. Been trying to show old ones on the blog while new ones at the same time. That way I can post updates here and there at the same time.

EDIT: Speaking of Kaya and Miki, here is one that I posted on the blog first. I thought might as well in order to keep my masters happy.

Model Job

[AshK]

Great work on your latest one! I like it a lot. I may start doing some captions of my own sometime but am not sure if I should. Good work as always!

[shinryou]

Great work on your latest one! I like it a lot. I may start doing some captions of my own sometime but am not sure if I should. Good work as always!

Is your avatar Makise?

[Maiden Miki]

I have another one. There are more new ones but just releasing them little by little.

Canadian Girlfriend

[muffinstud]

Okay, enough of me lurking at your captions. Now to tell you what I think!

I rather enjoy the visual flow of your captions. The text is colorful, easy to follow and read, and lends to the general sense of fun you usually have in the tone you set. I'm taking some notes, and you should see me stealing... er, I mean learning from you here in some of my work to come. Bravo, and keep it coming.

That said, I'd like to point out that sometimes it's difficult to tell just who's talking, especially in this latest one. It took me a couple reads to tell that all of the dialogue was coming from the girl in the picture. It would have been easier to follow if you didn't use the quotation marks.

All in all, I'm rather enjoying all this, and you (along with Feng and everyone else that's been captioning recently) have made me want to get more prolific.

[Ninian]

All in all, I'm rather enjoying all this, and you (along with Feng and everyone else that's been captioning recently) have made me want to get more prolific.

If it means more like this, I'm anticipating your return. You have a couple other of my favorites, but I forget what they are.