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Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 1:46 amby Maiden Miki
Well seeing Feng making his own captions kind of made me want to try out making a few captions. Been wanting to for a while and the captions that this site had did brought me here. So without further ado....
The cafe is now open.....Miki will be your maid for today. She will be serving you your captions with a hint of anime in them. Please enjoy.First up:Your typical maid captionIt always about the people
I surely hope you enjoy the captions and I hope to serve more soon. I try to keep them short but I guess they all can't be. If you have any comments then please feel free to leave some. Tips are welcome. heeheehee
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:27 amby Feng
These are some really nice captions Megan. Good pics with an interesting story to go along with it. So what's for the second course?
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 8:21 pmby Maiden Miki
Here comes the second course sir. I hope you enjoy these. This course includes a nice serving of bunnygirls.
Some fan art can go too farWho needs help?Bunny girls and friends
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:28 pmby Marky
Like the captions so far, minus a few grammatical errors.
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Tue Jul 05, 2011 7:20 pmby AlanGarouRedux
Nice to see some new life in this subforum. You've definitely got the hang of editing in the text, and besides for the previously mentioned typos and such they're pretty well written. Some variety would be nice, though.
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Wed Jul 06, 2011 12:04 amby Maiden Miki
Marky wrote:Like the captions so far, minus a few grammatical errors.
Grr....I mean....Oh dear! Grammatical errors. My greatest foe! I will try my best to take care of those in the future sir.AlanGarouRedux wrote:Nice to see some new life in this subforum. You've definitely got the hang of editing in the text, and besides for the previously mentioned typos and such they're pretty well written. Some variety would be nice, though.
Some variety? As in how?
I have another serving today. These were made before the comments above so please forgive me if there are a bit of bumps. Also they were prepare very late in the night. (haha) One of them includes something different on my behalf since I don't do first person point of views. The other is a continuation of a previous caption.Time are tough if you have to take a second jobSometimes you have to go back to school
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Wed Jul 06, 2011 7:54 amby Harri-chan
I love the back to school one, Miki <3
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Wed Jul 06, 2011 4:33 pmby AlanGarouRedux
Maiden Miki wrote:Some variety? As in how?
Never mind, the new captions addressed the complaint. I was just a bit confused by how many of the first two batches had the girls in bunny outfits.
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Thu Jul 07, 2011 11:52 amby Maiden Miki
Ickle Harri-chan wrote:I love the back to school one, Miki <3
Oh cool. Maybe I will do more involving the mansion and it's owner. Need to find more K-on girls.AlanGarouRedux wrote:Never mind, the new captions addressed the complaint. I was just a bit confused by how many of the first two batches had the girls in bunny outfits.
Oh okay. Just a heads up. Maybe the next batch will be just girls in swimsuits. I was just wandering around and found some and decided to just do that. Think of it as the Swimsuit edition. haha
Hmm...how do maids laugh?
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:23 amby Blaze
They're all really good Miki ^__^
Keep it up!
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:20 pmby Feng
*Wipes his mouth with a napkin*
Delectable! You're cooking is quite impressive Misstress Miki!
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Fri Jul 08, 2011 7:58 pmby Maiden Miki
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:42 amby AlanGarouRedux
The third one was the best of this batch, both in terms of writing and with how the words were worked into the image. The dialog was very natural, too. However, you might want to find a way to avoid the phrase "who would have guessed." Most writers have phrases that they overuse when free-writing, and I think that might be one of yours.
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Wed Jul 13, 2011 5:17 pmby AshK
All your captions are awesome. Maybe I should try my hand at them. Maybe I will maybe I won't good work!
Re: Miki the Maid: Serving Captions
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Fri Jul 15, 2011 1:37 amby Maiden Miki
Thank you very much for the nice comments masters.
I have brought another serving of captions. Took a bit longer due to not being all well. Still I hope you enjoy these two.That is not how you find 'x'I should have done a Harry Potter caption
