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Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:18 am
by Feng
I've always wanted to try my hand at captions since I first joined MSF yet never really got around to doing so. I'm easily distracted I suppose. >.<
Sooo without further distraction here's my first attempt:
Hanafuda Beverage PromotionFeedback and Constructive Criticism are welcomed.
((Bah. You always catch typos right after you submit. Darn it! X( ))
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 02, 2011 5:17 pm
by dr5
I like them and am wondering where did you get the idea for the card game?
if it your own I look forward to more and even if it is not your own I think I prefer that one but am not quite sure why.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:18 pm
by Feng
Thanks!
The Hanafuda caption was inspired by Yu Gi Oh only with the Japanese card game Hanafuda instead of a "Children's Card Game". I remember that episode where the people's souls were being trapped in the cards and when I found the picture on Safebooru I immediately thought of the series. I just wish I caught my typos first.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:49 pm
by Maiden Miki
Very cool captions. Glad to see more captions.
The first one was very interesting idea.
The second one I liked the most.
Keep them coming!
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:57 pm
by Feng
Thanks and will do! On that note:
Little sisters can be quite evil!While I think the storyline for this is a bit 'Meh', it was still fun to write. =P
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 02, 2011 10:38 pm
by Maiden Miki
Sounded like it was fun to write.
I love maid captions. haha
Keep them coming.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:20 pm
by Marky
Cool captions. Keep em coming, Feng. Liking what I'm seeing so far.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Tue Jul 05, 2011 7:14 pm
by AlanGarouRedux
The second one was the best so far, followed by the third. Both of them have a very nice flow of conversation.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:48 am
by dr5
I like your work and your sense of fun and, well payback is the word that is coming to mind but is not the word I want. Hope you continue to do good works.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:15 pm
by Feng
Thanks! Glad you guys like my work! ^_^
Here's a few more I've put together:
Research TeamModelingThe Game's Afoot! >:O ((Oh blast! The text cut off at the bottom. Curses and drats! D:< ))
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 09, 2011 11:03 am
by AlanGarouRedux
A couple of grammatical mistakes here and there. However,
Research Cat is so amazing that nobody has the right to care. I'd love to see her continued adventures.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 09, 2011 12:16 pm
by Feng
Glad you liked the Research caption. After I make a few edits fixing the grammatical errors in my past captions I'll see if I can write a sequel.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:32 pm
by AlanGarouRedux
Feng wrote:Glad you liked the Research caption. After I make a few edits fixing the grammatical errors in my past captions I'll see if I can write a sequel.
Awesome. I should probably start doing the same with some of mine.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Fri Jul 22, 2011 9:03 pm
by Feng
The following is one with Blaze's name on it, literally. Just a little job from Megan and I to maybe spark things off.
Coup D'EtatNext time, I'll try to include a sequel to research cat as well as whatever else comes up.
Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...
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Sat Jul 23, 2011 10:16 pm
by Blaze
AHahahahahah that was awesome~
I shall have to come up with a fitting retribution!