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Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 11:18 am
by Feng
I've always wanted to try my hand at captions since I first joined MSF yet never really got around to doing so. I'm easily distracted I suppose. >.<

Sooo without further distraction here's my first attempt:

Hanafuda
Beverage Promotion

Feedback and Constructive Criticism are welcomed. :D

((Bah. You always catch typos right after you submit. Darn it! X( ))

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 5:17 pm
by dr5
I like them and am wondering where did you get the idea for the card game?
if it your own I look forward to more and even if it is not your own I think I prefer that one but am not quite sure why.

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:18 pm
by Feng
Thanks! :D

The Hanafuda caption was inspired by Yu Gi Oh only with the Japanese card game Hanafuda instead of a "Children's Card Game". I remember that episode where the people's souls were being trapped in the cards and when I found the picture on Safebooru I immediately thought of the series. I just wish I caught my typos first. :?

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:49 pm
by Maiden Miki
Very cool captions. Glad to see more captions.

The first one was very interesting idea.

The second one I liked the most.

Keep them coming!

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 8:57 pm
by Feng
Thanks and will do! On that note:

Little sisters can be quite evil!

While I think the storyline for this is a bit 'Meh', it was still fun to write. =P

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 10:38 pm
by Maiden Miki
Sounded like it was fun to write.

I love maid captions. haha

Keep them coming.

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sun Jul 03, 2011 9:20 pm
by Marky
Cool captions. Keep em coming, Feng. Liking what I'm seeing so far.

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Tue Jul 05, 2011 7:14 pm
by AlanGarouRedux
The second one was the best so far, followed by the third. Both of them have a very nice flow of conversation.

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:48 am
by dr5
I like your work and your sense of fun and, well payback is the word that is coming to mind but is not the word I want. Hope you continue to do good works.

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Fri Jul 08, 2011 4:15 pm
by Feng
Thanks! Glad you guys like my work! ^_^

Here's a few more I've put together:

Research Team

Modeling

The Game's Afoot! >:O ((Oh blast! The text cut off at the bottom. Curses and drats! D:< ))

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 11:03 am
by AlanGarouRedux
A couple of grammatical mistakes here and there. However, Research Cat is so amazing that nobody has the right to care. I'd love to see her continued adventures. :D

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 12:16 pm
by Feng
Glad you liked the Research caption. After I make a few edits fixing the grammatical errors in my past captions I'll see if I can write a sequel. :mrgreen:

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 09, 2011 10:32 pm
by AlanGarouRedux
Feng wrote:Glad you liked the Research caption. After I make a few edits fixing the grammatical errors in my past captions I'll see if I can write a sequel. :mrgreen:

Awesome. I should probably start doing the same with some of mine.

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2011 9:03 pm
by Feng
The following is one with Blaze's name on it, literally. Just a little job from Megan and I to maybe spark things off. :twisted:

Coup D'Etat

Next time, I'll try to include a sequel to research cat as well as whatever else comes up.

Re: Feng's Captioning attempt(s)...

PostPosted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 10:16 pm
by Blaze
AHahahahahah that was awesome~

I shall have to come up with a fitting retribution! :twisted: