First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman
				
Posted: 
Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:58 pm 
				by Millinescence
				Alright, this be my first caption. If you like it, please leave a comment, I would appreciate any feedback. ^w^
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The Yolanda Talisman-
 
			 
			
				Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman
				
Posted: 
Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:53 pm 
				by Roggamer22
				Hah. Nice. XD
I wonder what would have happened if he actually waited until Midnight, lol.
			 
			
				Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman
				
Posted: 
Sun Apr 25, 2010 9:55 pm 
				by Andrea Anikerina
				Roggamer22 wrote:Hah. Nice. XD
I wonder what would have happened if he actually waited until Midnight, lol.
Agreed, having some context on what it does normally would make it better.
 
			 
			
				Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman
				
Posted: 
Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:31 pm 
				by Mitera Nikkou
				I thought it was alright. Of course, whenever I read something along these lines, I think of SRU. Curses! *Shakes fist at it!* Not that it detracts from it, or anything. I'm just not good with commenting on stuff and try to find something to use as filler... ^^;
			 
			
				Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman
				
Posted: 
Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:53 pm 
				by Millinescence
				Andrea Anikerina wrote:Roggamer22 wrote:Hah. Nice. XD
I wonder what would have happened if he actually waited until Midnight, lol.
Agreed, having some context on what it does normally would make it better.
 
Wellll~~ if he waited, it would've worked correctly, transforming him into a hunky bishie. =3