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First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:58 pm
by Millinescence
Alright, this be my first caption. If you like it, please leave a comment, I would appreciate any feedback. ^w^

-The Yolanda Talisman-

Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:53 pm
by Roggamer22
Hah. Nice. XD
I wonder what would have happened if he actually waited until Midnight, lol.

Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 9:55 pm
by Andrea Anikerina
Roggamer22 wrote:Hah. Nice. XD
I wonder what would have happened if he actually waited until Midnight, lol.


Agreed, having some context on what it does normally would make it better.

Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:31 pm
by Mitera Nikkou
I thought it was alright. Of course, whenever I read something along these lines, I think of SRU. Curses! *Shakes fist at it!* Not that it detracts from it, or anything. I'm just not good with commenting on stuff and try to find something to use as filler... ^^;

Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

PostPosted: Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:53 pm
by Millinescence
Andrea Anikerina wrote:
Roggamer22 wrote:Hah. Nice. XD
I wonder what would have happened if he actually waited until Midnight, lol.


Agreed, having some context on what it does normally would make it better.

Wellll~~ if he waited, it would've worked correctly, transforming him into a hunky bishie. =3