First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

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First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

Postby Millinescence » Sun Apr 25, 2010 7:58 pm

Alright, this be my first caption. If you like it, please leave a comment, I would appreciate any feedback. ^w^

-The Yolanda Talisman-
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Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

Postby Roggamer22 » Sun Apr 25, 2010 8:53 pm

Hah. Nice. XD
I wonder what would have happened if he actually waited until Midnight, lol.
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Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

Postby Andrea Anikerina » Sun Apr 25, 2010 9:55 pm

Roggamer22 wrote:Hah. Nice. XD
I wonder what would have happened if he actually waited until Midnight, lol.


Agreed, having some context on what it does normally would make it better.
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Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

Postby Mitera Nikkou » Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:31 pm

I thought it was alright. Of course, whenever I read something along these lines, I think of SRU. Curses! *Shakes fist at it!* Not that it detracts from it, or anything. I'm just not good with commenting on stuff and try to find something to use as filler... ^^;
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Re: First Caption: The Yolanda Talisman

Postby Millinescence » Sun Apr 25, 2010 10:53 pm

Andrea Anikerina wrote:
Roggamer22 wrote:Hah. Nice. XD
I wonder what would have happened if he actually waited until Midnight, lol.


Agreed, having some context on what it does normally would make it better.

Wellll~~ if he waited, it would've worked correctly, transforming him into a hunky bishie. =3
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