Magical Sailor Fuku

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http://img379.imageshack.us/img379/2456/tgcap01nt0.jpg
(A tad on the adult side, view at own discretion.)

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What do ya'll think?

I'll get around to what I think after you put them in link format; at the very least the first one, with a warning to go along with it. ;/

Oh, yeah; I almost forgot about this. <_<;

They were pretty standard, but that's better than sub-standard, so... Yeah, I'm not selling this, am I? I'll never be good at this stuff. ;/

This is my first ever try at it. Like most of you, I use Microsoft Paint.

Here's my obligatory "Welcome to the world of captioning" post.

Sup, foo.

Now, to business. I like the style, I myself have wondered how some of mine would look like with the text in the picture. Now, I want to try it. As for the captions themselves, I preferred the playboy one. Even though I don't like bondage type stuff, it just seemed to have a little better flow than the others, in my opinion. Don't get me wrong, for starting out, these are great. The characters just seem kind of... flat. It's probably the hardest part, making a rounded character in just a couple sentences, but that's part of the challenge for me.

But hey, more practice for you means more cheesecake, er, I mean art for me to appreciate... Heh...yeah.

Thanks for the info.

I have two more:



http://img213.imageshack.us/img213/5713/towellay2dx8.jpg
(This one has the text cut off for some reason.)

The first one's a bit hard to read.

It's tough to use a good font color when half of it is light and the other half dark.

You've got some decent story ideas, Flannery!

The text does get hard to read, however. Here's a couple suggestions on how to improve readability:

-Changing the text color to a color that contrasts against its immediate background
-Extending the canvas of the image and writing on that portion
-Increasing font size and/or changing fonts

In addition, as a clerical favor it helps a bunch to just post the link and not stick the image.

Keep working at it!

Thanks.

I have a few lined up, I'll have at least two of them done by the weekend.

Here is a new one:

I love it. May the fun continue.

Oh golly, look at the time. My oh my where has my head have gone? Well, I have about 10 or so caps and I'll try and post one a day. Here the first:

Enjoy!

*Smacks forehead.* I'm a noob! I noticed several mistakes!

Second Edit: Remade and reedited.