Whatevr's Captions--criticism encouraged

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Re: Criticism wanted

Postby Whatevr89532 » Thu Oct 16, 2008 9:06 am

Hmn..it interests me..but...there are a few problems with trying to do that at the present...

1st and main being, I don't have much time to do extra stuff right now. Lucky to be able to do a few normal captions now and then; this is also why I've dropped out of the muffin room for the time being.
2nd, I generally don't find CG inspiring--generally there's a range of anime style that I'm good with, and outside of that, I rarely have many ideas...and it's hard to find two pictures in that category that are even possibly the same person...
3rd, of course, my primary focus is on actual transformation--that being where I do my best work; the rest has a tendency of being a bit shallow already as it is.
Eh, of course I could probably work through the 2nd and 3rd if the 1st were solved... So I'll save the idea for later?

For the moment though, I have a couple of new ones in the 'normal captions' category. "Back to School" and "Not So Tall".
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Re: Criticism wanted

Postby muffinstud » Thu Oct 16, 2008 8:43 pm

I liked Not so Tall. Just thought I'd say it.

And hey, I know how you feel about not having much time. It's only just recently I've found time to do stuff here, so I'm making the most of what time I've got. You gotta take care of real life first and foremost, so I respect that.

As for the cg stuff, I personally don't like sifting through it because I'm not a fan of the hentai that's littered throughout. That's why I suggested asking Nekkid: He/She/It/They has quite the gallery of clean cg pics (at least, I'm pretty sure...).

But hey, it's good to see you're still alive and all. That's always a plus. Keep up the good work and rock, rock on!
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Re: Criticism wanted

Postby AshK » Sat Oct 25, 2008 1:19 am

I have read a couple of your newer captions Back to School and Uncommon cold. Uncommon Cold is kind of hard for me to read because of the Bright Color being on the Bright Background. I would appreciate it if you would change the text color on the Uncommon Cold because it's a bit hard for me to read. good work on Back To School by the way! Keep on Keepin' On!
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Re: Criticism wanted

Postby Whatevr89532 » Sun Nov 02, 2008 8:35 am

Update: A few more added.
Also, I've reorganized the album so that it won't be so hard to find the new ones when they're uploaded. Some of the earliest have been corrected and reuploaded, so I'm not sure the exact order near the older bunch is correct, but aside from that it's pretty much from newest to oldest.
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Re: Criticism wanted

Postby Ookalf » Sun Nov 02, 2008 3:39 pm

Good as usual, Whatever.
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Re: Criticism wanted

Postby Whatevr89532 » Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:20 pm

3 new images: a 2-part caption in the series section and a normal caption.

Don't have time to say much now but I'm working on a hopefully longer-term series...that'll hopefully be the next thing posted.
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Re: Criticism wanted

Postby Whatevr89532 » Sat Jan 10, 2009 3:19 pm

The first three of the new, hopefully long-term series are finally up!

http://s255.photobucket.com/albums/hh13 ... %20Island/

(Intended to be read in order, but can be read individually as well.)

Changing Island is something I've been working on for awhile now...once I'm through with the first bunch of them it might even be an RP or something...
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Re: Criticism wanted

Postby Mitera Nikkou » Sat Jan 10, 2009 7:01 pm

Hmmmm... Interesting.

You write pretty well, and have a good balance between length and description. I wonder why I haven't noticed your captions before... Or maybe I just have a bad memory. ;/
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Re: Whatevr's Captions--criticism encouraged

Postby Whatevr89532 » Sat Jan 10, 2009 8:24 pm

Thank you :D
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Re: Whatevr's Captions--criticism encouraged

Postby Xia » Sun Jan 11, 2009 5:00 am

I saw a post in the caption room with the thread author as "Whatevr89532"...my first reaction was "IT'S A BOT, KILL IT WITH FIRE YESSSS DIEDIEDIEDIEDIE BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURN" as is normal when I see a seemingly not correct set of letters followed by numbers :D

Thankfully I read the post eh? ^_^

that aside, good captions :o
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Re: Whatevr's Captions--criticism encouraged

Postby Whatevr89532 » Sun Jan 11, 2009 2:25 pm

Um, thanks for not banning me? XD
No, the name actually comes from my photobucket account, which was my first instance of an online alias. It was going to just be "whatever", but naturally that name was taken...hence the misspelling and funky numbers.

Also thank you, on the captions. :D
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Re: Whatevr's Captions--criticism encouraged

Postby Firingwall » Thu Jan 15, 2009 4:43 pm

I hate to bring you bad news, but your first caption for your island series has been remove due to the fact that it violated a rule of photobucket. I never got a chance to see the image so I couldn't know why it was removed.
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Re: Whatevr's Captions--criticism encouraged

Postby Whatevr89532 » Thu Jan 15, 2009 5:39 pm

Wow, the first one? I'll have to fix it, then, I suppose... thanks for informing me.

Edit: Image has been reuploaded. I don't know what the problem was...
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Re: Whatevr's Captions--criticism encouraged

Postby Whatevr89532 » Thu Mar 19, 2009 10:50 pm

A few more have been added since my last post, in the normal captions section.
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Re: Whatevr's Captions--criticism encouraged

Postby Funny Hat + Funny Accent » Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:15 am

Interesting stuff...

Also, I finally figured out how to view the most recent uploads first instead of trying to sift through everything.

Nicely done!
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