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Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:26 am
by Lanzerus
I know the idea has been used several times before, two guys find a shady video game, play it lose they lose something important to them.

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but hey, it was a one shot kinda thing and i thought why not it doesn't seem that hard

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 1:40 pm
by Haylie
The idea has indeed been used many times. Video game-wise, at least. But it's one of those ideas that never gets old, y'know? Nonetheless, I thought it was pretty good for a first cap. Short 'n' sweet, that's how most like it. I also like the looks on their faces. Good work.

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:09 pm
by UDDCommander
Hay-chan wrote:The idea has indeed been used many times. Video game-wise, at least. But it's one of those ideas that never gets old, y'know?



True, the idea never gets old and it was very well done for a first cap, keep it up.

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 12:03 am
by Lanzerus
i toyed around with font colours! ^_^

http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z184 ... /lolol.jpg

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 1:40 am
by jimmyinwhite
both are great captions. can you do more?

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:33 am
by Miyukicl
^^ yes really nice captions!!!

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:20 pm
by Haylie
Not a bad concept, the second one. I'm sorry, but I have to point out the spelling and capitalization errors, though. I'm a stickler for such things, I'm sorry. It just bugs the crap out of me when people don't spell things or capitalize them properly. Otherwise, it's a pretty good caption. I could never do the separate-color-font thing.

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:21 pm
by Lanzerus
you just have to understand how to use paint which unfortunately has no spelling grammar check so its kinda hard for me to get everything... WEWT FOR DYSLEXIA!

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:25 pm
by Haylie
Right, sorry.

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:36 pm
by Lanzerus
Its okay, my doctor says that using the computer as often as i do its actually helping my condition ^-^

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:03 pm
by Haylie
Oh, good. I hope it gets better. My folks actually think being on the computer and video games is bad for me. HA! Showed them, ya did!

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 10:48 pm
by Lucky
Your quility of captions are getting better. Keep up the hard work.

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:15 pm
by Hira Kanaki
Yes, the quality of your captions are getting better, also for the spelling and grammar check I use word sometimes to write out the script of a caption, then paste it onto the caption when it's done.

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:47 pm
by Lanzerus
http://i194.photobucket.com/albums/z184 ... OTCOOL.jpg

one more just before bed, also thanks for the word idea, Im sure it will help alot.

Re: Keatons first and (maybe) last caption.

PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:15 am
by jimmyinwhite
They keep getting better and better.