by Mistress Guendolen » Sun Aug 26, 2007 11:59 pm
Very good, both of them. The second one was just this little snippet, a glimpse, as it were, like one panel in a slide show. It hinted without going into full narration, which is an interesting way of doing things. And number one, in the same style, was even more interesting. I'd love to know more about this target and what not. Heck, no transformation was definitively involved, for certain. I actually kind of like that. It leaves us open to all sorts of interpretations.
Adding to the magical kitten girl army...one huggle at a time mraa