Firingwall's Captions

[Firingwall]

Yo, I am Firingwall. An ex-member of YouTube, but that's not important. I been to this to this website looking around for a year and now I decided to be a member, but I like for you all to see some of my work and give me your opinion on them. Here's a few links:

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... gizine.jpg

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... =Ranma.jpg

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... rmGirl.jpg

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... Better.jpg

[Haylie]

Pretty good, just watch your spelling and grammar. Plus, the Farm Girl caption was sort of cut off at the bottom. Fix that, and you're golden. I need more captions, seriously.

[muffinstud]

Welcome to the caption crew! Rather than appraise these few captions, I'll give you a quick suggestion: You should bring over your monster cache from photobucket ASAP! So far all of it has been great quality and perfect for MSF. We could use more captioners like you 'round these parts.

[Firingwall]

Rather than appraise these few captions, I'll give you a quick suggestion: You should bring over your monster cache from photobucket ASAP!

True... but I rather start showing off a few at a time that I like to highlight at the moment, but just head over to my Photobucket profile if you want to see them all at once.

The Link Is:

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222/Firingwall/

...the Farm Girl caption was sort of cut off at the bottom. Fix that, and you're golden.

I kind of fixed it by adding an ending. Might not be the best in the world, but it'll do its job. I had to add another picture of it in its new form, here's the link:

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... Girl-1.jpg

[Stellar]

*Stellar approves further captioning!* ^_^

[Katty]

Welcome to the forum. One thing I gotta say, the color you picked for your text is a real eye strain. As for your first captions, they were good, but remember to look for grammer and spelling. I kinda thought the farm girl one was evil, the bad kind at that as well.

I'll have to look at your photobucket account some time. =^-^=

[MarioDS01]

Man, oh Man. You have a TON of good captions in your photobucket album account. And makes most of them better it that they are happy outcomes and endings. I have a ton of favs from you now! I am the same way that I want happy outcomes and endings to my TG captions as well!

I hope you make alot more good captions my friend. Try using the link to all my subalbums of the images you can do captions on.

Oh, here is a few suggestions from me. Maybe, you make romantic TG caption stories with a boy turned girl with her male best friend. Maybe some family ones. How about trying more sci-fi and fantasy captions. Try some Neko captions and other hybrids. Make some wedding ones or ones there the boy turned girl marries her male best friend and maybe want to start a family. And maybe some TG Product captions as well! Just a few kinds I can suggest to you.

Hope to see you around! With more excellent tg captions from you!

[Sasha]

not bad i'm sure i've seen a few of em on the net before

[Rowan]

Very good!

^___^

The flow could use a little work though.

[UDDCommander]

Good job. Keep it up.

[Firingwall]

One thing I gotta say, the color you picked for your text is a real eye strain. As for your first captions, they were good, but remember to look for grammer and spelling. I kinda thought the farm girl one was evil, the bad kind at that as well.

Sorry about the color, I'll just keep it as black. Yeah, I know about the grammar and spelling, it kind of stinks. Also, regarding the Farm Girl caption, you always kind of have to an evil one among all the light and happy ones.

Back to my captions, if you been to my photobucket account, you'll notice that a lot of my captions have my signature on them. I put them their so that no one would tried to steal them from me, but a bunch of my old ones don't have my signature on them. Here's a few examples of this and I like to see some opinion on these ones:

Captions Without My Signature:
http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... yBeach.jpg
http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... lyABit.jpg

Captions With My Signature:
http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... Polite.jpg
http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... search.jpg

[Haylie]

*Applauds*
Excellent. But, like I said, watch that spelling and grammar. It's nothing too bad, at least I can tell what it means, but they'll be even better if they're proofread.

Always proofread to make sure you don't anything out.

Outside of that, keep up the good work.

[Rowan]

Those were great! ^___^

I loved the Beach and Potion ones hehe.

[Miyukicl]

always new captionist are welcome ....¬_¬ it remember to me that must caption a pic soon lol

[Firingwall]

Nothing new to say or report, but I like to share with you some of my other works this time.

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... ent=CD.jpg

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... ccused.jpg

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... League.jpg

http://s195.photobucket.com/albums/z222 ... lanner.jpg

Try using the link to all my subalbums of the images you can do captions on.

I have done that before already on several occasions. You have a very nice selection of pictures.