Magical Sailor Fuku

by **Jayme** » Fri Jun 29, 2007 7:44 pm

It's been a while since i've done any real captions, they've been up in my brain but I never had the energy to sit down and try to make any captions.. so I figure "Why the heck not?" so anyways.. its a chain (un-determined number of captions in a single chain).. here is the first one.. there is no real story to it.. there is no end.. or middle.. just a beginning...

Plotting..

by **Mitera Nikkou** » Sat Jun 30, 2007 5:52 am

There's not much that I feel that I could resolutely until this progresses further, perhaps to completion. So, I shall wait. :O *Plants rear somewhere*

by **Jayme** » Sat Jun 30, 2007 1:34 pm

So here are the next two parts.. I am not good with grammar/punctuation.. so im sorry if things seem weird or whatever

.. the ideas come to me.. not how to word those ideas..

Attack...

Aftermath...

by **muffinstud** » Sat Jun 30, 2007 1:42 pm

Well well well, nice set-up. The first one by itself wasn't enough to build the tension for me, but now I am very curious just how things will pan out. Yes, there are a few spots where grammar could be better, but hey, the story makes up for it in my opinion.

Here's hoping for something crazy in the next installment.

by **Mistress Guendolen** » Sat Jun 30, 2007 4:54 pm

Interesting story progression here, though I do believe I can see where this is going: some sort of new medical procedure that will save him, but somehow cause him to become female in the process. At least, that's my guess. I'll keep reading to see if I'm right.

by **MarioDS01** » Sat Jun 30, 2007 7:14 pm

Guendolen wrote:nteresting story progression here, though I do believe I can see where this is going: some sort of new medical procedure that will save him, but somehow cause him to become female in the process. At least, that's my guess. I'll keep reading to see if I'm right.

That is exactly what I am guess Guendolen, that the side effect will turn the guy to a female since there has to be a gender transformation involved in here.

It would make the story more interesting since the main character has a bestfriend who is a guy, and his bestfriend could fall in love with the main character when he changes to a girl. Hopefully the changes will be mostly physical and not mental, I do want him/her to be himherself in mind.

I will curious how this story unfolds in the next caption or 2.

by **Mistress Guendolen** » Sat Jun 30, 2007 7:33 pm

Well, that's up to Jayme and no one else. I don't know if she's into love stories or not. Not everyone is, after all. We'll just have to wait and see what she's got planned, huh?

by **Jayme** » Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:24 pm

This next one would've taken a while.. I wanted to find a picture of the same thing to use.. but instead its probably gonna be of different girls to represent the same one.. unlike the first 3 which were of the same guy..

The grammar sucks.. the ideas were jumbled in my head.. it may seem cliche at the moment but im hoping to expand further in future comics so bear with me..

Medication...

by **Rowan** » Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:26 pm

Good so far

by **MarioDS01** » Sun Jul 01, 2007 9:08 pm

I was right, with that medication and the other medications he would change to a girl somehow. Hopefully she will wake up soon. I would like to see more to this story since it getting alot more interesting with the guy being changed to a girl.

by **Funny Hat + Funny Accent** » Tue Jul 03, 2007 7:27 am

Huh...nicely done Jayme.

Magical Sailor Fuku

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