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				Please don't kill me but...
				
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Tue Jun 19, 2007 4:37 pm 
				by Mendi-chan
				
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Tue Jun 19, 2007 4:51 pm 
				by Zoey
				Actually it's pretty good. I liked it ^_^
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:07 pm 
				by muffinstud
				Nice touch at the end. I have nothing to be harsh about.
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:22 pm 
				by Rowan
				I liked it ^_^
You seemed to avoid all of the normal mistakes and I didn't see any abnormal ones hehe.
What would you call it though? "Hot Springs Switch and Bait"?
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:29 pm 
				by Lucky
				It's a very good caption. You sould go on and make more.
^^
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:36 pm 
				by Mendi-chan
				I just saw a few typos that I missed... x_X
Thanks for the compliments guys. ^^
@Rowan: I dunno what I'd title it. That seems like a good title to me. XD
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Wed Jun 20, 2007 8:41 am 
				by Katty
				It's a nice caption. It is well thought out as well. Keep is up. =^-^=
			 
			
		
			
				
				
Posted: 
Sat Jun 23, 2007 1:06 am 
				by jimmyinwhite
				what happened to the peeping tom did he be come a peeping tonya?