My first caption... Please don't be to harsh. x_X
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Please don't kill me but...
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by Zoey » Tue Jun 19, 2007 4:51 pm
Actually it's pretty good. I liked it ^_^
"Let me confirm, your shelter shield is activated?"
"What are you planning?!"
"Your shelter is secure, is it?"
"Of course it is! Just see for yourself how powerless you are!"
"...Roger that."
"What are you planning?!"
"Your shelter is secure, is it?"
"Of course it is! Just see for yourself how powerless you are!"
"...Roger that."
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by muffinstud » Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:07 pm
Nice touch at the end. I have nothing to be harsh about.
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by Rowan » Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:22 pm
I liked it ^_^
You seemed to avoid all of the normal mistakes and I didn't see any abnormal ones hehe.
What would you call it though? "Hot Springs Switch and Bait"?
You seemed to avoid all of the normal mistakes and I didn't see any abnormal ones hehe.
What would you call it though? "Hot Springs Switch and Bait"?
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by Lucky » Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:29 pm
It's a very good caption. You sould go on and make more.
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by Mendi-chan » Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:36 pm
I just saw a few typos that I missed... x_X
Thanks for the compliments guys. ^^
@Rowan: I dunno what I'd title it. That seems like a good title to me. XD
Thanks for the compliments guys. ^^
@Rowan: I dunno what I'd title it. That seems like a good title to me. XD
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by jimmyinwhite » Sat Jun 23, 2007 1:06 am
what happened to the peeping tom did he be come a peeping tonya?
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