Arya's captions!

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Arya's captions!

Postby Tala » Sat Jun 16, 2007 1:31 am

I finily decided to make a caption. I had to shrink the pic so it is not the best quality but it is good. Tell my what you think of my ending.

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb21/rspurkey01/captions/caption1.jpg

The letter quality is not teh best eather but you can read it. Tell me if you need me to put what it says on the site here.
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Postby Katty » Sat Jun 16, 2007 6:40 am

Nice first caption. But wait, if reality shifted, then how did the news man know about it? =^-^=
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Postby Lucky » Sat Jun 16, 2007 11:42 am

The image looks abit disdorted, like it was scaled down then enlarged. It's good to rember you can shrink something but not inlarge it. It's a good caption thow, you sould keep going.
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Katty wrote:Nice first caption. But wait, if reality shifted, then how did the news man know about it? =^-^=


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Postby Tala » Sat Jun 16, 2007 1:27 pm

the reality shifted in the school only. I didn't explain it very well.
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Postby muffinstud » Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:05 pm

Hey, don't knock yourself. For a first caption, that was really good. I personally think the announcer could have been another "naturalist." That's the nice thing about not explaining everything: it leaves people to guess and make up their own stories. That, I think, is the best thing a caption can do. Yours did that pretty well.
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Postby Tala » Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:16 pm

Thank you. I will make more later.
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Postby Stellar » Sat Jun 16, 2007 2:20 pm

And here I was thinking the reporter could have been from another planet or dimension. Anyway~

Enjoyable.

Make more =)
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Postby Tala » Sat Jun 16, 2007 3:34 pm

thank all of you so much. I rarely get prase for things I do.
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Postby Stellar » Sat Jun 16, 2007 4:13 pm

That just proves the winds of change are in effect =)
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Postby Katty » Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:14 pm

Sorry if I sounded rude in my last post. I liked your caption very much so. =^-^=
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Postby Mitera Nikkou » Sat Jun 16, 2007 5:31 pm

I thought that it was alright overall, but the image needs work (the visual part of the caption is important as well). We'll have to find you something that can make images smaller without distorting it like that. What had you used? I've used MS Paint before but I never saw it come out that bad.

If you care to, you can upload the original image to your photobucket so I can nab it and resize it for you.
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Postby Rowan » Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:16 pm

I like it. I got what you meant, I figured it was only a localized effect.

Like you said yourself, the picture quality didn't turn out too well. You'll work out those kidns of problems pretty quick with a little trial and error though, I just know it ^_^.
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Postby Tala » Wed Jun 27, 2007 2:12 am

My scond caption.

http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb21/rspurkey01/captions/caption2.png

I would like all my captions I have posted and all my fiture one put on the site please. Thank you. Under the name Arya.
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Postby Stellar » Wed Jun 27, 2007 3:37 am

TG grand prix... That strikes intrigue. The only thing I say needs to be addressed is why is it a TG grand prix? Is it like the racers are trying to make the top 3 to be changed back into guys, or the top 3 get to stay as girls as a prize or should I try not to worry about the 'why?'
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Postby Katty » Wed Jun 27, 2007 6:26 am

While it does bring up those questions, it is also a very cute little story.

But yes, I was wondering why a TG grand prix as well. =^-^=
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