Magical Sailor Fuku

by **Temet nosce** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 5:23 am

Ahh the weather...Always impressive. I knew there must be some reason Ive always loved storms.

by **Kumi-chan** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 9:48 am

Nice. That is a cool one.

by **Duck** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 11:42 am

The only real problem i see that hasn't been hit is word choice.

The stories don't really seem to flow, they start and end aburptly. It seems like you want to say more, but don't.

But, i can see improvement from the first to the last, so you are getting a hang of it. Weather was just delightful.

by **Nikki** » Wed Jul 27, 2005 7:00 pm

Another new caption. Except more than one per post in the future

New Diet Plan

by **Kumi-chan** » Thu Jul 28, 2005 12:01 am

Nice one very well done.

by **Nikki** » Sat Jul 30, 2005 10:58 pm

two more

Girls Can Play Basketball

Made Royalty

by **Siegfried** » Sun Jul 31, 2005 7:42 am

Great!

by **Kumi-chan** » Sun Jul 31, 2005 9:39 am

Nice. But the second one is hard to read. I could barely make it out.

by **Duck** » Sun Jul 31, 2005 10:55 am

on the basketball one it looks like your missing the word "fun" in the last sentance.

the second one... green on orange... bad.

It makes that text nearly illegiable.

by **Temet nosce** » Sun Jul 31, 2005 11:53 am

They are nice but as mentioned by others the words are blurred in the second.

by **Nikki** » Wed Aug 03, 2005 12:20 pm

two more

Always read the job description

This one was inspired by my Shoujoland Rp

I haz Youtube · by **Hira Kanaki** » Wed Aug 03, 2005 12:27 pm

Good captions especially the Shoujoland Rp one, but I couldn't read the first one however.

by **Nikki** » Wed Aug 03, 2005 12:32 pm

I deleted the first one so now there's only two

by **Kumi-chan** » Wed Aug 03, 2005 1:20 pm

nice captions. They are good.

by **Nikki** » Sat Aug 20, 2005 6:38 pm

Now we're older

Always pay for your meal

Magical Sailor Fuku

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