Stellar wrote:They're a little repetative (talking about the 9 you made a few posts ago). I read them, and most of them are too lovey and mushy for my tastes. Also there's not really any reason that the captioned character decides to fall in love with a boy.
Mental changes work, a longer story of the two friends relationship before durring and after the transformation works too, but you were just a little too short handed with the transformations.
It would be my best guess to say that you wish you were a tomboy to date a friend of yours, we write what we wish were true/what we know about.
The first few batches of my own captions were as such then I expanded stories and ideas to make dynamic captions that people wouldn't have anything to complain about.
Try a different way to deliver the caption. Scratch that, don't think of it as a caption at all. Think of it as a story with a picture, that way you don't limit yourself. Heck, even make a story first then find a picture that fits the story, I've done such a dozen times, and am in the process of doing it again (I just need to get photoshop working! >I). With all of that said, short captions aren't bad, you just need to have an interesting/funny/and or innovative way to deliver a point in a couple sentences.
And for you continued captions, why do you feel a need to complete a story that someone left unfinished? It's fine, I personally don't want you continuing one of my captions without consulting me first, but besides that like I mentioned befeore, get creative. You readdress the initial caption then tack on that the tged person fell in love an lived happily ever after. Life sucks, and a sucky life is alot funner to read about because people relate to it better.
Now, let that sink in. I don't wanna leave a bad taste in your mouth, but you're not going to make dynamic captions unless you keep hearing it and reach for a random thought that says "a baseball cap will turn this victem into a girl in this story then their grandma will have the remedy of an enchanted fork passed down in their family! But the boy realizes it's awesome as a girl because he's allowed in the girls locker room and decides to say a girl for a few days! But!@ His grandma tells him if he stays a girl much longer he'll be stuck that way unless he hikes to an old friend of hers, whom is a witch, out in the middle of Yellow Stone! What's a boy enchanted by a baseball hat to do?!" *Stellar cracks her knuckles* Dang, that one would have made a good caption. But it is now an example of a random thought conjured in 83 seconds.
Keep going mario, you'll have captions that everyone wants to read soon =)
Yeah, I know they are pretty lovey dovy to some people, but that is what kind of captions I like to make. Besides if a boy get tged to a girl and stuck as a girl forever, they would as well make the best life out of it as a girl and still be friends to there best friend and have a better relation to them.
And yeah I know there are many with the tomboy stuff in the captions. I guess I have a thing for tomboys a little or a lot. It is just most tged boys for a transformed into girl with there still male mind unaltered would want to be a tomboy. I would too if I happened to be transformed to a girl.
And yes mental changes do work, but I would only use those with the bad guys, bullies and evil creatures being transformed to girls and become nicer. Other then that I will not use that concept on a inocent victim unless if the the mental and reality changes still make them be still friends to their male friend in some way or form like the sequel to Childhood memories and the return of the bench leperchan.
I may take your suggestion to making my own captions before finding the right image to fit with the caption, maybe. But I work a little differently and find an image I think would make a good story and come up with one. But you suggestion still helps a little.
I think I might as well drop the continuing to the story of that first caption yesterday. It just does not seem to be worth my time and energy to argue if it continues or not. I can use my imagination in my head to make it a happy ending without you continuing the caption. So sorry of all the arguing.
Well, I hope to see more good ones from you. Maybe make some of my liking as well for a change and try to use some of my images in the link in the bottom of this message.
