It's a bit incoherant...using First Person in Memory Loss, but letting her remember that she's losing memories? It's just worded...badly. Picture rocks. Concept...interesting. Last line is good, but first person was a mistake.
(Takes a deep breath and releases a big sigh) I love the smell of halloween in december. Anyway, love the caps, few as there are. The farie one was pretty funny, at least the pic was. Can't wait to see more, but you just take your time and come at your own pace. =^-^=
Well I only have one caption but it's in the Christmas spirit...after too much pop and listening to "You're The Inspiration" too much...sure it wasn't crazy but it did lead into a caption.
...Just in case I forget... Merry Christmas! =^_^=
Chibi MitchellTF wrote:You should use 'hear' when he's talking about what Fanboys are saying.
And I don't quite get the 'pants' caption.
Ok, I really have to proofread my stuff, anyway with the pants caption I wrote something in a fanfic that wasn't really used in actuality in one of my fanfics, the lines said in that were very random as was the caption...